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pforte

In The Dead of The Night - chapter three

Dec 02, 2008 11:06

Story: In The Dead of The Night
Chapter title: Well, crap.
Fandom: Southern Vampire Novels
Pairing: Sookie/Eric
Rating: PG-13
Summary: There is always something up in the supernatural world. Being under attack, the vampires at Fangtasia are no happy campers and Sookie has more than one reason to be hesitant about being close to Eric.
Spoilers: For ( Read more... )

southern vampire novels, sookie/eric

Comments 24

lillbet December 2 2008, 10:30:17 UTC

I thought *I* was your little squishie. XC

eumelkeks December 2 2008, 10:40:45 UTC

You and comments. But most of all you, yes.

solsticedawn December 2 2008, 12:34:13 UTC

Oh noez! Pam!

Enjoying the fiction :) One small thing, though, Americans almost never say "mum," that's a British thing. Amelia referred to her "mum."

pforte December 2 2008, 12:40:30 UTC

Fixed. :) Thanks. I know the rule but sometimes I do these things subconsciously.

mexicantt December 2 2008, 16:11:32 UTC

Pam! I love Pam! But score for Eric kicking ass. I hope one of the people he killed was the jerk, though somehow I doubt it.

Very good. Of course, you should know that.
And I don't think I had read the previous chapter. UNF. I reread. SO. GOOD. MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM............

eumelkeks December 2 2008, 17:06:45 UTC

You missed the previous chapter? The SEX chapter? I am horrified. *lol*

But thanks. I'm glad you like.

desertwillow December 2 2008, 16:33:18 UTC

Great as usual! Looking forward to the next chapter

pforte December 2 2008, 17:07:13 UTC

Thank you. :)

solsticedawn December 2 2008, 18:50:18 UTC

avatar love :)

andacus December 2 2008, 16:58:02 UTC

NOT PAM! Darn you. Cliffhangers are very mean. You should be ashamed.

Lovely new chapter. Nice job of keeping Sookie wary of whatever it is she's got going on with Eric, that's one of the most consistent things about the books and you've kept to it. Also, I love her thought processes.

<3

eumelkeks December 2 2008, 17:09:36 UTC

NOT PAM! Darn you. Cliffhangers are very mean. You should be ashamed.

No, cliffhangers are awesome. Be happy that no vampire walked around in broad daylight. :p

And I'm glad you find the relationship credible. It's tricky to have them in a, well, relationship because the book!Sookie is so not ready for this.

andacus December 2 2008, 21:39:21 UTC

They are not awesome when you only update every six months.

And please no! Not the daytime wandering of vampires! Do not get me started.

She's really not ready at all, but that's what fanfic is for and your transition into the "relationship" (for lack of a better title) has been great so far.