In The Dead of The Night - chapter one

Sep 20, 2008 11:36

Story: In The Dead of The Night
Chapter title: Ready. Steady. Go.
Fandom: Southern Vampire Novels
Pairing: Sookie/Eric
Rating: PG-13
Summary: There is always something up in the supernatural world. Being under attack, the vampires at Fangtasia are no happy campers and Sookie has more than one reason to be hesitant about being close to Eric.
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andacus September 20 2008, 16:17:25 UTC
SQUEEE!! So good!

You've got a great handle on Sookie and the way she thinks and your Eric dialogue is great! I especially like that he orchestrates the move out of the bar area - using the truth and his advantage to draw her out. It's so Eric

How many chapters are you writing?

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pforte September 20 2008, 16:36:54 UTC
How many chapters are you writing?

I'm not sure yet. Whenever I plan on a certain number I eat my words later.

I'm so happy that you think I got the characters. :D

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isis_uf September 20 2008, 19:44:48 UTC
I... I want to hug you for this. SO MUCH AWESOME! Your Eric is so very Eric. Even in a situation that puts him not in control, he still manages some way to orchestrate things so that he retains some bit of power (especially in his interpersonal interactions. Especially with Sookie). And Sookie's self-deception about what she's doing and why (with regards to Eric... or, actually, men in general) is very canon. Oh, also? Your Pam is fantastic, as Pam ought to always be - blunt and savoring other people's vulnerabilities and discomfort. I loved her calling Sookie out about the dress. She so would, LOL. SO MUCH LOVE! I can't wait for more.

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andacus September 20 2008, 22:19:10 UTC
Kiss-ass

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Mwahaha eumelkeks September 20 2008, 22:35:40 UTC

... )

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isis_uf September 20 2008, 22:37:11 UTC
Hey, when it's deserved...

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ashspark September 20 2008, 21:17:21 UTC
I loved it... I can't wait for the rest!

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pforte September 21 2008, 05:43:41 UTC
Thank you. :)

I'm working on it but I cannot make any promises as to how long the next chapter will take. Uni is eating my time. Unfair, yes?

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nadinetink September 20 2008, 21:52:14 UTC
Wow, this was amazing! I really felt like I was reading one of the books; this is so canon *loves*

But I must say, you are evil. You can't end it like that! I want the 2nd part now!

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eumelkeks September 21 2008, 05:44:50 UTC
I didn't want to have a sex scene in the first chapter, which is more of a prologue anyway. But now you've got something to look forward to. ;)

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belldandy100 September 20 2008, 22:06:10 UTC
AHHH, not the dreaded "to be continued"!!!

It can be so difficult to capture Charlaine's easy going style without sounding corny - You have really found the perfect balance and that inner Sookie voice. I am looking forward to the next chapter. :)

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pforte September 21 2008, 05:46:38 UTC
AHHH, not the dreaded "to be continued"!!!

But it's a good thing, too, because there is close to no chaptered fic in this fandom. ;)

Thanks so much for reading and commenting. I'm glad you liked it.

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