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It feels so familiar to the night of the love ball, walking down the steps their hands intertwined and swinging between them when Naomi uttered those three words for the first time. Emily had to look away then, to try and contain the euphoric smile that was taking over her face, to keep from doing a fucking happy dance because she had finally
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It’s the times when Emily shoots her a meaningful glance from across the room, or when she says something completely witty to the point where Naomi is almost jealous that she didn’t come up with it her self, or even when she laughs in that adorably cute way where her nose crinkles and lips curl into a smile that it hits Naomi how lucky she really is.
Oh my. It's all one sentence, too.
What's a little distracting, though, is that there doesn't really seem to be running plot, a real direction throughout the entire fic, it's random bits that've been collected together, but altogether it's a bit messy.
Aside from that, lovely and fluffy, and thank goodness because I've had a bad day :P
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I hope you don't mind if I add you to follow your fic updates. I love your writing.
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