Comments | pevensie_love: Edmund/Lucy fic

hammergal in pevensie_love

Edmund/Lucy fic

Apr 26, 2011 13:38

Hi there, I come with an Edmund/Lucy fic. They are definitely my favorite Narnia characters (not to mention I adore the actors portraying them as well!), and I was inspired recently to write an E/L romance. I used a plot device, interestingly I was reading the book (LWW)and found a reference Aslan made to the "Deep Magic" and how it affects all ( Read more... )

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suborbital April 27 2011, 07:04:09 UTC

Oh that was beautiful. I know it's probably a one shot but any chance of a sequel?

hammergal April 28 2011, 00:04:54 UTC

Thank you for commenting! And yes, I plan to continue this! Hope you enjoy, I'll be back soon, I hope, with more.

delsilencio May 3 2011, 02:45:28 UTC

WOW! I loved it!
The kind of conspiracy feeling that everybody knows but them, lol! though they're starting to feel a change between them. The whole deep magic plot to support the relationship between them. What I loved the most was the Edmund's confusion and struggle, the vague notion that he should love Lucy but doesn't know exactly why.. I tell you, BRILLIANT. It quite fits the dream of a dream of dream vibe.

I do hope you continue this.

hammergal May 5 2011, 00:22:28 UTC

Thank you!! Your comments are exactly what I was hoping the reader would get from my story. I am inspired to write more! I will return soon with another chapter.

delsilencio May 5 2011, 02:22:48 UTC

YES! GREAT news!!!

BTW, I meant to say that "notion that he shouldn't love Lucy but doesn't know exactly why.." >.< lol! My thoughts were in kind of a jungle mess. I hope you got my meaning...

Though, curiously enough, if we consider the deep magic in your fic verse, my mistake works well with it! lol.. Either way, ohh the wrongness and the torture, it's very interesting, specially for Edmund who already has to live with the betrayal of his family. (although, it's done and forgiven) I supposes, some things (or feelings) makes you remember whether you like it or not. Oh Edmund :( How long he's going to fight it. And Lucy..! the other side of the coin er..

/shuts ramblings.

:)) *waits patiently*

susumiya08 March 24 2013, 03:37:22 UTC

fuck yeah!!!it was beautiful, just keep writing!!! more loooooove!!!!! I'll be waiting