The Important Parts, Chapter 17

Mar 02, 2011 05:41


               Luke was tired from awaking early to smuggle in the print that he bought for Reid before the doctor arrived at work.  He arrived at the hospital particularly early after a sleepless night.  Thoughts of the box Reid had thrown away had kept Luke awake all night. Luke had rolled around in his bed so much that all the sheets were ( Read more... )

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shadownyc March 2 2011, 12:50:01 UTC
Great idea and great chapter!

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petuniagirl March 3 2011, 00:08:29 UTC
Thank you so much!

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marsabi March 2 2011, 12:55:42 UTC
Great job! You really captured how both Reid and Luke would be feeling ! I love the idea of that drug too.

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petuniagirl March 3 2011, 00:09:44 UTC
Thank you! All soaps have their made up drugs, so I figured I could do it too. I've been kind of unhappy with Reid lately so I tacked on that last scene yesterday to flesh out how he was feeling.

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shar_jere March 2 2011, 13:31:44 UTC
Why are you making this so hard reid just give in you know you want too!! afterall reid you fell for him once and can do it again great update!!

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petuniagirl March 3 2011, 00:10:21 UTC
Thank you! Things start to change for Reid relatively soon!

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petuniagirl March 3 2011, 00:12:58 UTC
Fret not, the next chapter is on the lighter side if I remember correctly. I can only do so much angst before I need a bit of relief.
It's certainly not comforting that someone at the hospital was in on it....

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rhiannonhero March 2 2011, 15:33:16 UTC
Love it! :) I can't wait for more! :D

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petuniagirl March 3 2011, 00:13:13 UTC
Thank you!

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