Comments | petuniagirl: The Important Parts, Chapter 16

petuniagirl

The Important Parts, Chapter 16

Feb 27, 2011 18:43

The dreams, however, only partially contributed to Reid being in a particularly foul mood on his fourth day of incarceration in Oakdale. When he had not been dreaming of Luke’s voice, he would wake to the image of Luke Snyder’s bare chest. His lack of control annoyed him endlessly. Not only was he thinking about it while he was ( Read more... )

fanfic, luke snyder, lure, reid oliver, the important parts

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rhiannonhero February 28 2011, 00:18:11 UTC

:) Very much enjoying this! Thank you!

petuniagirl February 28 2011, 04:25:43 UTC

I'm glad you're liking it!

stl29tide February 28 2011, 00:32:01 UTC

Gah! I'm constantly wanting more of this story. It's soooooo good!!! :D

petuniagirl February 28 2011, 04:26:14 UTC

Thank you!!! I really appreciate it coming from you--I love your stories so much!

daybreaq February 28 2011, 00:34:24 UTC

I like how Reid keeps insisting he doesn't remember anything and before, how he stated it was doubtful his memory would return and yet ... he keeps remembering things, snippets in dreams? He's being stubborn and resistant. I wonder what would happen if he actively decided he *wanted* to remember.

petuniagirl February 28 2011, 04:29:25 UTC

He's definitely being stubborn. I don't totally blame him since he's only known Luke for a little over a week at this point, and Luke did drag him to Oakdale against his will. Plus, what he does remember (or hear in his sleep) is always so negative and has been for years. I could see where it might set him against Luke a little. But still, I'll be glad when I get to the point in my story where Reid's a little less stubborn and a little more willing to cooperate.

petuniagirl February 28 2011, 04:30:51 UTC

Oh, and I meant to say thank you somewhere in there, but got caught up in my thoughts. So, thank you for your comments!

smoothlikebutta February 28 2011, 00:55:11 UTC

I felt so bad for Luke when Reid threw the box away. I am glad he still isn't giving up. I loved how you incorporated the Sistine Chapel article into the story.

petuniagirl February 28 2011, 04:32:44 UTC

Thanks! I felt bad writing that scene. I don't think Reid would have done it if he had thought a bit more about it beforehand. But, once he committed to it, he wasn't going back.
I almost ended the chapter on the box scene, but I couldn't stomach it.

joann414 February 28 2011, 01:14:48 UTC

Reid is being so damn stubborn, but what can you expect? This gets better and better. Thanks

petuniagirl February 28 2011, 04:34:17 UTC

Thank you! I'll be glad when Reid gets a little less stubborn!