The Important Parts, Chapter 6

Jan 30, 2011 07:01


Chapter 6

I watched you die.  The words echoed in his head.  Dropping his hand from the doorknob, Reid slowly turned and replied, “You what now?”

Luke really had not wanted to broach this part of the story this early, but it was naïve thinking he could avoid it.  “First, my name is Luke Snyder.  But to answer your question, it’s a long story. ( Read more... )

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ltklo January 30 2011, 16:53:00 UTC
I think Luke is doing this just right. And it's very sad to think of Reid thinking that no one cared enough to be there after his accident.

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anwamane13 January 30 2011, 16:57:26 UTC
I can't tell you how happy I am to see that Reid believed in Luke's story. Now, all Luke needs to do is:
-find out who did this, why and how,
-help Reid recover his memory or at least part of it,
-prove to the world that Reid is alive
-find out whose heart is inside Chris,
-make Reid fall in love with him again,
-make Reid admit he's in love with Luke...
WOW. It looks like Luke has a lot of work ahead, LOL. I'm anxious to see how all of this will happen!
Great chapter!

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petuniagirl January 31 2011, 02:03:25 UTC
Yikes, it looks like I have lots of work ahead!
Thank you!

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traciamc January 30 2011, 18:28:56 UTC
This is so good! Reid was so...well, Reid! I'm glad Luke was able to get through to him, if only a little bit. But we know our Luke, he's nothing if not persistent! He'll worm his way right back into Reid's heart, even if it takes a while!

Can't wait for more!

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petuniagirl January 31 2011, 02:04:17 UTC
Thanks and you're right--Luke will win over Reid in the end!

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jem_018 January 30 2011, 18:59:53 UTC
Oh wow.
at least Reid isn't running away screaming. Haha :D
But this isn't gonna be easy for Luke.

great chapter. :)

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petuniagirl January 31 2011, 02:05:01 UTC
Thank you!

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_alicesprings January 30 2011, 20:23:54 UTC
Oh, Reid.

Yay, great chapter!

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petuniagirl January 31 2011, 02:05:16 UTC
Thanks!

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