The Important Parts, Chapter 4

Jan 27, 2011 07:44

Chapter 4

Luke still was uncertain that the past three minutes had not taken place in his head.  Reid.  Reid is alive.  But, he had seen Reid die with his own eyes.  He had kissed Reid in his final moment on earth.  Reid was dead-that was the reality that Luke knew was real.  So what was this?

Marcus had guided Luke to his office ( Read more... )

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_alicesprings January 27 2011, 13:16:58 UTC
Whee! I'm loving this! More soon plz! :D

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petuniagirl January 28 2011, 00:30:39 UTC
Thanks and as soon as I can write another chapter, I'll post chapter 5. It may be a few days :(

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_alicesprings January 28 2011, 01:11:48 UTC
LOL, take your time. I'm just impatient. ;)

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vintagelamb January 27 2011, 14:27:45 UTC
Commenting both places because this deserves it.

I feel like a kid hopped up on Skittles. My heart is racing, I'm squealing with glee and I think I may have just done a lap or two around the room.

More. Now. Please, of course.

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petuniagirl January 28 2011, 00:31:01 UTC
Thank you! Commenting twice is always welcome!

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shar_jere January 27 2011, 14:43:34 UTC
this is an awesome fic and i love where its going. I can't wait for them to meet face to face..

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petuniagirl January 28 2011, 00:31:11 UTC
Thanks!

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petuniagirl January 28 2011, 00:32:54 UTC
You'll have to wait and see who is behind all of this :)

Their conversation will be interesting. Let's just be glad that Luke didn't catch Reid in that elevator and jump all over him--now that would be bad!

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traciamc January 27 2011, 14:46:07 UTC
Wow - I don't know how I missed this! But I just got caught up, and now I am all kinds of excited! Can't wait to read the next chapter...soon?

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petuniagirl January 28 2011, 00:33:56 UTC
Thank you! I may be a few days this time--I need to start writing more chapters before I post the next one!

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