The Perfect Boyfriend, Part 2 (continued)

[petuniagirl]

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Reid quietly jogged towards the pond, stopping when he finally spotted Luke.  The younger man's back was turned to him, and Reid couldn't see his face.  There was little wind that day, so the atmosphere was calm and quiet.

It was rare in Oakdale for Luke and Reid to be alone, particularly without four solid walls and a lock

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Great job

[lloydletta]

I love the dialog in this fic as well as "The Important Parts" - you've got a real ear for both the boys and you keep Reid in his snarky sarcastic lovable self.

Re: Great job

[petuniagirl]

Thank you so much!

[ltklo]

That was a surprising turn - the sound of Noah's voice is the traumatic event that causes Reid's memory to return. LOL!

I like Reid's explanation that his memory didn't change his love for Luke but did make him feel the hurt of how Noah used to treat Luke. Awwwww....

[petuniagirl]

Thank you!

[sleeper6]

You have such comedic talent. And the fluff is fantastic too. Your Reid is so Reid. And he and Luke aren't perfect, just perfect for each other.

Wonderful!

[petuniagirl]

Thank you!

[lexii314]

Incredibly sweet and very funny. I haven't read the complete works of this verese yet. Looks very intresting and soapy.

[petuniagirl]

Thank you! If you ever end up reading the Important Parts, I think it reads a bit better and is certainly soapy!

[tldreamer]

Somehow I missed this, but wanted to let you know I enjoyed it very, very much! I'm so glad that the minute that they have everything sorted out and life looks like it will be perfect...well, it's Oakdale, and a disaster happens! Yay!

[petuniagirl]

Thank you! Disasters lurk in every corner of Oakdale.