The Important Parts, Chapter 1, Part 2

[petuniagirl]

The third year, the anniversary was freezing cold.  Frost crunched underneath his feet in the early morning as he trod toward the pond.  Thinking upon the last year, Luke realized that he had made many changes.  He had sold Grimaldi Shipping and concentrated exclusively on the foundation.  Casey had graduated law school and returned, without

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[biu07]

I've got the flu and a high temperature. At the end of this part I am crying my eyes out and not because I am ill. It is so touching! I can't wait to read more :)

[petuniagirl]

First, I hope you feel better! Second, I'm glad you liked it despite the tears. I'm a little taken aback by how sad people are finding it since I feel like I'm better at writing pretty emotionless nonfiction or lighthearted humor.

[sripley]

This was so beautifully painful, watching Luke as time passes. I can't wait to see how you remedy all of this!
<3

[petuniagirl]

Thank you! Things will start to lighten up soon....

[msv713]

This is amazing - the depth of Luke's emotions... Can't wait to see what you are going to do with this story. Thanx.

[petuniagirl]

You're welcome, but thank you!

[joann414]

Crying, but this is so moving, and so emotional. Can't wait to see what comes. thanks

[petuniagirl]

Thank you. Cheer up! Things get better soon for Luke.

[jem_018]

Reading about Luke being like this is so painful. *sobs*

Can't wait to see where you go with this.

[petuniagirl]

Sorry it hurts! I hope the story pays off; I've been nervously sitting on it for weeks now.