thirty-second post; fanfic- spread your mind, your legs

[rinnakins]

title: spread your mind, your legs
characters: miharu, yoite
summary: You're laying close to him, and so you can feel his breath on your neck; it's like baking soda and blood.
notes: it's written in first person, present tense.

Comments

[kannnichtfranz]

Very nice work! Makes me hurt for them, as it should. :)

[littlelinor]

The feeling is perfect, and the imagery well chosen.

[urae]

Your fingers want to wander like bruises.
^ I simply loved that line, just because it makes me think of hands roaming over skin like blood expands (probably not the right word to be using, but whatever) underneath skin when one gets a bruise. That line is just pure genius.
<3

[nekodanko]

^ THIS SO HARD

[nekodanko]

dafijas;ojis your fics are always so concise and poignant and powerful I am blown away