thirty-eighth post; fanfic- rats under heels

[rinnakins]

title: rats under heels
characters: after-sora-but-before-yoite
summary: Alone in a room with Hattori is never where he wants to be, and his heart is left like a little moth trapped behind glass.
notes: fanon for his first use of kira.
hi it's been three months since i wrote fanfic. ffffffuuuuu *THROWS NOTEBOOKS THROUGH THE WINDOW* I WILL NEVER GO SO

Comments

[ravebox]

This is absolutely beautiful and the way it's written is almost poetic to me. I love it. Great job! <3

[nubs]

Awww, Sora~ Considering how kind he was and how "cruel" Yoite could be, I love how you've shown a possible transition! And the style is really great~ Almost first person, but not. I love it!

[imaginethekiss]

Poor Sora... with his already tragic past, it's no wonder he's always so closed up inside himself. The fic was great, I love your writing and I hope to read more soon! ^_^

[sir_spiffalot]

Yay a Rinnafic!
...is it flattering or extremely creeperish that I've taken to calling your writing that in my head?

You describe the way Kamatani's characters move so well~