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neatchaos in petersusan

Lingering

Dec 10, 2006 02:33

Lingering
Pairing: (implied) Peter/Susan
Rating: G
Summary: He was dreaming. He had to be.
Word count: 125

He was dreaming. He had to be.

There was no way she could be laying next to him. There was no way he would ever again see her dark, dark hair spill intricately over the pillow, or hear her high, soft breathing in his ear.

And yet…he could feel her ( Read more... )

fic: drabbles, fic: g

Comments 6

jemmir December 10 2006, 10:10:30 UTC

*swoons*

Wonderful short fic. Don't leave Peter like that. Write more.

xsay_goodnight December 10 2006, 11:00:24 UTC

Very very good. I agree with jemmir, write more (:

neatchaos December 10 2006, 15:57:41 UTC

Thanks so much, both of you! It was meant to be a drabble, since I was shy about posting my first fic, but I'm going to write a sequel with an idea I've been toying with.

P.S. to xsay_goodnight: I hope you don't mind, but I snagged that Susan icon from you because I thought it was so beautiful!

xsay_goodnight December 11 2006, 03:44:48 UTC

Nooo, I don't mind!

scullymulder123 December 11 2006, 01:24:02 UTC

BEST. DRABBLE. EVER.

*is sad* Poor Peter...how, like him, I wish it had been true. Wonderful job.

rogue_lane December 12 2006, 04:58:44 UTC

I agree with scullymulder, BEST DRABBLE EVER.

*runs off to read sequel.