Flu From Hell

Jun 22, 2010 20:48

Title: Flu from Hell
Pairing: Pinto
Rating: R
Summary: Chris falls ill and Zach arrives to look after him.
Disclaimer: We do not own the actors, unfortunately. Not even as pets.
Word Count: 4507
Authors: petbubble and leandralocke
Authors' notes: This fic was inspired when my co-author caught a heavy cold this week and actually tweeted that her brain had liquidated. ( Read more... )

rps, zachary quinto, chris pine, genre: romance, pinto, r, length: one-shot, fanfic, genre: fluff

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leandralocke June 22 2010, 19:55:39 UTC
I think there should have been more snot though. There wasn't enough snot. Next time we'll write it with more snot. Once more, with snot :D
*sneezes and blows nose*

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petbubble June 22 2010, 20:01:01 UTC
Sorry - you wanted more snot did you? I dunno... I think we got we got a bit of snot in there. How much more snot would you have like, do you snot- errr I mean think?

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leandralocke June 22 2010, 20:02:50 UTC
As much as has been coming out of MY nose the past few hours. Like... I dunno, a bucket full? Bathtub?

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petbubble June 22 2010, 20:06:45 UTC
That is just so disgusting, madam. Yet Zach approves of the lubrication.

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petbubble June 22 2010, 20:27:29 UTC
Hehe yeah - have to admit I was a little worried when I read yours.

But your story is very warm and loving (where Zach is properly ill - ours is basically taking the piss out of Chris being a big girl.

And thank you! Your feedback is appreciated x

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petbubble June 22 2010, 21:18:16 UTC
Indeed it does *laughs*

And I'm waiting for more of yours... *hints*

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foom101 June 22 2010, 21:12:58 UTC
HAHA!! AWW! It was LOVELY! Damn though 'cause I was hoping for some monkey sex in the end, haha. =P

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petbubble June 22 2010, 21:17:25 UTC
LOL Thank you!

We actually had two endings in mind - this one and another where they did end up having some sweaty sex. We decided to save that for an occasion where there's less snot and wheezing involved XD

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leandralocke June 23 2010, 04:43:43 UTC
Yes, that's what Chris was hoping for as well, but you know... sometimes fate just doesn't allow it ;-)

We'll write some hot monkey sex eventually *g*

Thanks for the review.

AHHHH! *smacks petbubble's and own head* We gotta change the rating to PG or R (for language). You used the last one as template huh?

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petbubble June 23 2010, 06:56:57 UTC
OUCH *smacks you back harder*

Yu-huh, and changed XD

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tinocka June 23 2010, 07:07:43 UTC
*giggles*

So good :D

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frauleinl June 23 2010, 07:38:43 UTC
HAHAHAHA! This was perfect! The farting? I laughed so hard IRL!! It made me all gooey inside, my innards liquified HAHA! Reminded me of when I had to be an awesome nurse-wife!

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