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Fic: Tron: Mercy (Tron/Alan)

May 11, 2011 12:18

This fic is for lixia84, via the 'Write for Relief' charity auction for Japan! It's somewhat belated for which, again, grovelling apologies, and this is still only the first part - more to come, hopefully quickly :) Thanks for your patience, lixia84, and I hope you enjoy <3

Title: Mercy, pt 1/2
Fandom: Tron
Pairing: Tron/Alan
Rating: NC-17 overall (this part is ( Read more... )

Comments 5

dislex1a May 11 2011, 12:54:43 UTC

Hnnnng. This is everything I wanted and so much more!! <3

I love the way you've actually drawn out Tron and Alan's relationship so that the trust between them becomes such an important factor, instead of just being something that's hinted at because of the kink. The fact that Tron actively consents to having his control taken away like that when he's actually so full of self-confidence in other matters just gives the fic that little extra frisson...

Really, really, really looking forward to the next part now. But I'll try to be patient. XD THANK YOU!!!!

pet_lunatic May 12 2011, 10:56:03 UTC

:D Yay! I'm so pleased you like it!

Thanks very much for your comments <3 My porn always ends up being rambly...glad it came across as intended and didn't distract from the action, lol!

emerald1972 May 11 2011, 13:53:21 UTC

*sound of me hitting the floor* Oh damn that was hot, and awesomely written. Really, really well done. I love how you captured both the authority, and the tenderness of the Dom/Sub relationship, simply delightful. :)

pet_lunatic May 12 2011, 11:00:46 UTC

:D Thank you very much! Not having written Dom/Sub before I was quite nervous about depicting the relationship in a believable way - I really appreciate your comments <3

nhpw May 20 2011, 13:25:42 UTC

Uuughhh this is masterful. The element with the passage of time gos a long way to put the reader right there in that room with Tron, and I love the switch to Alan's POV at the end. I love that he acknowledges a little bit of ego with regard to his love for Tron. I love the allusion to the fact that Alan may once have been shy and awkward himself. I love Tron's logical conclusion about the surrender of free will. Just. I could go on and on, but I clearly have more reading to do. :D