I really feel for Jim. It's all turning out to be very interesting actually, and all the talk about drugs and killing himself and Gene, makes me wonder...
Thank you very much! I was a bit worried about this part because of the inclusion of another OC, so I'm glad you liked Ravi :)
Hee. The Gwen Cooper thing was sort of accidental - I used the surname 'Cooper', and then when I wanted a first name, 'Gwen' popped into my head; I only realised afterwards where I'd got the name from. I left it in to see whether anybody would notice :D
Lovely - as always. Your Keats is fascinating, a thoroughly compelling character. The Betamax sequence (and the way you slipped us on the other side of the mirror for a time) absolutely enthralled me. More, please!
I've just read all the parts in one go, and usually I wait until the end of the story to review, but I had to leave a comment on this part. I loved Sam's cameo, I loved Ravi and Jim's friendship, and I loved Gene and Jim's banter at the end. And even though I shouldn't be all sniffly over His Demon-ness over there, the flashbacks to his human life and the hints we get about his childhood and eventual fate just made me so, so sad for him.
Regarding the earlier parts, I have to compliment you on an excellently creepy Superintendant Callaghan, who's such bad news that even Keats is scared of him. The scenes in the beginning where we see Jim was punished, and the bits where you see just how sinister Callaghan is are well done.
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I really feel for Jim. It's all turning out to be very interesting actually, and all the talk about drugs and killing himself and Gene, makes me wonder...
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All will be revealed :)
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Love Jim and Ravi's relationship, I have to say. Made me chuckle quite a bit. Jim would totally be a Coldplay fan.
Oh, and I have to ask - Gwen Cooper - Torchwood reference? xD
Great stuff, as always!
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Hee. The Gwen Cooper thing was sort of accidental - I used the surname 'Cooper', and then when I wanted a first name, 'Gwen' popped into my head; I only realised afterwards where I'd got the name from. I left it in to see whether anybody would notice :D
Thanks again for commenting!
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Regarding the earlier parts, I have to compliment you on an excellently creepy Superintendant Callaghan, who's such bad news that even Keats is scared of him. The scenes in the beginning where we see Jim was punished, and the bits where you see just how sinister Callaghan is are well done.
Cannot wait to see the ending!
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