[fic] Kicked Out of Time, Part 1

[pestshingowrite]

Title: Kicked Out of Time, Part 1
Author: shingo_the_pest
Rating: PG-13
Genre and/or Pairing: Neal and Peter, may become slash
Spoilers: none
Warnings: WIP
Summary: Neal suddenly finds himself in the past, alone, and not sure what's going on. “Do I know you?” Peter asked. Neal’s smile slowly dropped.

Comments

[lonetread]

I'm not sure I can express how much I love this. Just... asl;kdglhalehlk nnkldz;flkmhzdeh;mdeh. *flails* So much.

More soon, please?

[pestshingowrite]

Flaily comment makes me go whee! The next chapter is up. =)

[hoosierbitch]

Ooooh!

I can't wait to see what comes next! I loved Neal's initial figuring-out-scene when he first started talking to Elizabeth - perfectly IC!

[pestshingowrite]

Thank you! =) I'm tickled that you're reading this. Got any new porn? =D

[yamoriya]

Great catch!! I love this story so much, can't wait next part.

[pestshingowrite]

Thank you~! <3 The next chapter is up.

[misura]

This may be a case where the truth is much, much stranger than fiction - although I love how Neal (admittedly under a fake name) tries not to lie more to Peter than he has to.

Given Neal's choice of name, I'm also holding out some hope that we may see an er relative of his show up in future chapters?

[pestshingowrite]

I always liked that Peter drew honesty from Neal, by cutting through through the bullshit, and offering trust. It's become habit and comfortable for Neal, and he feels ungrounded without it.

You're hoping to see Uncle Haversham show up? Oh wow, that thought makes me laugh. Short Mozzie and tall, skinny Neal related. Peter would see through that in a minute.

[pestshingowrite]

Oops! Thank you. =)