In Another Life

Aug 05, 2011 16:07

Title: In Another Life
Fandom: Harry Potter
Pairing: Severus/Lily
Rating: PG
Word Count: 6,123
Summary: “Do you ever think about what it would be like to be ordinary?” Severus Snape dies that May night in the Shrieking Shack... and then wakes up to a life wholly unexpected.
Author’s Notes: This one takes some explaining, but you may want to read ( Read more... )

rating: pg, genre: romance, genre: au, fandom: harry potter, character: severus snape, genre: general, character: oc, genre: angst, ship: severus/lily, character: lily evans (potter), character: sirius black, character: james potter, *fic, genre: fluff

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leigh_adams August 6 2011, 00:34:08 UTC
Oh, this was beautiful! I'll admit, I don't often read Severus/Lily, but you've done a wonderful job-- and this was well worth reading! I really like how the two realities were juxtaposed against one another, and you can really feel Severus's confusion.

Excellent job! Thank you for sharing!

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peskywhistpaw August 6 2011, 23:39:15 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

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ryuuvictoire August 6 2011, 00:49:11 UTC
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ryuuvictoire August 6 2011, 00:50:49 UTC
That was my honest to god first reaction. I even had to complete a Capcha thingy to post that.

I love this. I love this. I love this. I don't read a lot of Sev/Lily despite them being my favourite HP pairing because often I find their story too painful... and this was so wonderful.

So wonderful.

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peskywhistpaw August 6 2011, 23:40:59 UTC
Hee hee. I'm really glad you enjoyed this! (Honestly, I feel that the best comments involve keyboard mashing. So I'm really honored.) I definitely know what you mean about not reading a lot of fics about them, though. So sad.

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semiseverus August 6 2011, 00:57:11 UTC
This is so beautiful and poignant! I love the parallels between each universe, and the sweetness of the Muggle one, and the way Severus has grown instead of staying bitter and depressed.

Thanks for sharing; this is going in my memories!

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peskywhistpaw August 6 2011, 23:41:37 UTC
I'm honored you enjoyed it so much! Thank you!

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called_daughter August 6 2011, 02:02:13 UTC
Beautiful, really, really beautiful. Such a wonderful original idea.

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peskywhistpaw August 6 2011, 23:41:48 UTC
Thank you!

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sarcasticval August 6 2011, 05:06:17 UTC
Oh, wow. Wow, wow, wow. I silently weep because I know that nothing I write in this little box can possibly convey how lovely and intelligent and poetic and just plain awesome this story is. So well done! Gold star for you.

Now if you'll excuse me I'm off to rummage through all your tags and check out the rest of your writing!

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peskywhistpaw August 6 2011, 23:42:39 UTC
Thank you so much! And trust me, anything you've written in that little box is much appreciated!

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sarcasticval August 9 2011, 01:27:15 UTC
I have to admit, I kind of adore young Snape x Lily fic like woah. (Especially AUs where his life doesn't turn out to be a ubiquitous black hole of suck because dude.) Whenever I find a story of quality I feel the need to bombard the author with praise in the secret hopes of encouraging them to write more.

...oops. I totally just let the cat out of the bag, didn't I? :)

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peskywhistpaw August 9 2011, 03:09:26 UTC
Me too!

And, heh. Your icon is suspiciously appropriate. XD Actually, I have a couple of things planned (a possible ficmix focusing mostly on their childhood, and something inspired by a moment in this fic, actually, the bit where Severus remembers Lily kissing him at Christmas), so hopefully your praises won't be for naught. XD

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