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peskywhistpaw

Even if the World Changes

Oct 19, 2009 17:19

Title: Even if the World Changes
Fandom: Twilight
Characters: the wolf pack (minus Brady and Colin, because I don't remember them at all)
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 2,000
Summary: “You’re not leaving this around for posterity to find.” Three werewolves and an old video camera. Boys will be boys, after all.
Author’s Notes: Not sure how I feel about ( Read more... )

fandom: twilight, character: paul, rating: pg-13, character: jared, genre: general, genre: humor, character: sam uley, character: jacob black, character: embry call, character: seth clearwater, character: quil ateara, character: leah clearwater, gift, *fic

Comments 14

colorless_ideas October 20 2009, 00:55:53 UTC

OMGGGGGGGGGGGGG ASDFGHJKLSD

This was so, so awesome! Seriously. I was laughing out loud while reading, my roommate came to ask me what was wrong cos I wouldn't shut up and she's studying.

I loved your Quil/Jake/Embry dynamic. And the fact that sometimes I couldn't tell which line was whose cos that'd totally be talking at the same time and teasing each other so it makes the banter more real.

Aw! The Sam/Leah mention <3 my heart, really. Nearly broke.

LOL @ Emily blueberry muffin.

THE WHOLE THING IS MADE OF PURE WIN AND OMG I LOVED IT!
Thanks so much! *hugs*

peskywhistpaw October 20 2009, 16:52:27 UTC

Aww, I'm so glad you liked it! ♥ I was trying to think of a creative way to have the boys be silly but also have some Sam/Leah, and this was what came out of it. XD

kailorien October 20 2009, 02:27:06 UTC

Once again Baby, you've earned top spot on my Favorite Author list. I laughed at so many things through this, saw it all playing out in my head like a movie.
The Sam/Leah thing made me catch my breath, whimper. It was so beautifully tragic.
I don't think I could rave about this enough.

Awesome work.

peskywhistpaw October 20 2009, 16:53:24 UTC

D'aww, you're so sweet! :D

I'm really glad it came out funny, though. I could picture it happening in my head, but I wasn't sure if I'd be able to translate that picture exactly into words.

missrobyn81 October 20 2009, 02:29:00 UTC

Death by cheese... awesome

peskywhistpaw October 20 2009, 16:53:35 UTC

So worth it, right? XD

missrobyn81 October 20 2009, 23:57:50 UTC

Totally

haydn_hottie October 20 2009, 13:37:43 UTC

“Lactose intolerant people are stupid.”

hahaha...!Full of lol'z and grin-worthy! ♥ Nice work BB!!!

Srsly, its been awhile since I've last read a fic from you and its such a shame coz you're one of the brilliant writers I've known. I really wish you'll get inspired more often and write more wolfpack, specially J/B fics!!!

peskywhistpaw October 20 2009, 16:54:21 UTC

Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

Awwwww. ♥ I really haven't been inspired lately, but I hope that'll change. I really do love writing Twilight fic. XD

sunnyzim October 20 2009, 13:41:23 UTC

I loved this!! It was so funny and quirky and well thought out - and I especially loved the last paragraph - very beautiful and poignantly written;-) Good job! This was a well-written, original piece of work:)

peskywhistpaw October 20 2009, 16:54:37 UTC

Thank you so much! :D