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peskywhistpaw

Let the Circle Be Unbroken

Aug 08, 2008 01:02

Title: Let the Circle Be Unbroken
Fandom: Twilight
Pairing: JACOB/LEAH, Jacob/Bella, Edward/Bella
Rating: light R (for implied violence, swearing, and somewhat disturbing content)
Word Count: ~3,100
Summary: She tolerates it, mostly, because she won’t leave Jacob alone; she won’t abandon him in a world full of vampires and magic he can’t escape. He ( Read more... )

fandom: twilight, genre: romance, ship: jacob/leah, genre: dark, genre: angst, character: jacob black, ship: edward/bella, character: seth clearwater, character: leah clearwater, character: edward cullen, ship: jacob/bella, *fic, rating: r, character: bella swan, character: renesmee cullen

Comments 82

tehuberfangirl August 8 2008, 08:59:14 UTC

Yay, you killed her you killed her :P! *claps hands* :D.

peskywhistpaw August 8 2008, 09:05:20 UTC

Haha - yay, indeed! She was just asking for it. :P

tehuberfangirl August 8 2008, 09:07:28 UTC

You should totally post this at pack_cest :P its not done yet but still :P.

mystery_cat August 8 2008, 11:45:30 UTC

so... this was a little bit creepy... and 100% awesome. i'm slightly unnerved by the idea of leah killing her.. but heck, somebody had to!

peskywhistpaw August 8 2008, 20:16:31 UTC

Yeah... It was supposed to be creepy - but then I kind of creeped myself out while writing it, too. :P

wwonder August 8 2008, 13:55:06 UTC

omg i'm so weirdly happy that you killed the spawn.
this was so good, and i love the way you wrote leah.

peskywhistpaw August 8 2008, 20:17:18 UTC

Thanks very much!

mars_again August 8 2008, 15:11:01 UTC

i love this
it makes me think that leah is the readers
she's like "wtf just happened?" like the rest of us

i like how she doesn't give up on Jacob :DD

peskywhistpaw August 8 2008, 20:17:49 UTC

I'm glad you enjoyed it! :D

wm_law2003 August 8 2008, 19:10:18 UTC

Holy CRAP. You had Leah kill Nessie?!?

Well SHIT. I haven't seen that before.

You win "The Ballsiest Fanfic of the Week" award.

peskywhistpaw August 8 2008, 20:19:32 UTC

LOL. Yeah. Thanks. XD

I think it was only because I saw this one J/L fanfic where Jacob wouldn't let Leah hold Nessie because she looked like she wanted to tear her to shreds. And I was like, well... somebody's got to do it, right? Gahhh...

wm_law2003 August 8 2008, 20:27:49 UTC

I hope you realized that my comment reflected that fact that I really liked it!

peskywhistpaw August 8 2008, 20:44:04 UTC

Oh, yeah, no worries! ♥