Never Ending Torment

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Title: Never Ending Torment
Pairings: So far MF, but will eventually be ... much more.
Appropriate Ratings: NC17
Warnings: Blood sport, serious body mutilation, slavery, non-con, very dark, vampires
Disclaimers: None, these are my characters, this is my story
Short Summary: A vampire lord breaks in his newest aquisition.
Word Count: 5204 (As per MS

Comments

[lydia_velvet]

great writing, but what comes next?!! oh the suspence!

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I have slightly more written on my computer... I just don't feel it's ready to be posted yet. Needs more tweaking. Plus, I have to be in the right sadistic mood for this kind of erotica... you'd be surprised how hard that can be sometimes.

[greycloud4]

Gah! My God. Oh my God. I stopped at the tasting own flesh part lmao. wow. I didnt even know this sort of sadism could even be fathomed by a human mind. You're so twisted and I like it, You must be extremely intelligent. How old are you?
This didnt really scare me per se, it was just my first macabre if i can call it that. Really well written but dark as hell, if you are to write more to this i think it'll be the last one i pursue. I'm tying to get through your shorter fics before i settle down to the longer ones. I'm really so excited to see what else you come up with, and please dont try to discourage me incase its anything worse than this, I like to draw an unbiased opinion u know?
ha i dont know why i'm laughing lol
long comment...

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Wow, okay, didn't expect you to make your way back here. NO ONE reads this thing. I started it as an outlet for my darker writings and realized no one would ever read it and switched to fan fic. MUCH more of an active readership there. This is probably going to end up a novel on my computer never to be published for the public... plus, I just re-read it and WOW are there errors. EEK! How'd I ever post this in public?

Thanks so much for the comment!