I squee-ed a little when I saw Connie's name, so I was already happy even before I clicked the link. :D
I love love LOVE the whole first section of this more than is healthy. Love Kennedy and Matt's patter and John's reactions. Kennedy is a nicely realized OC and hello, Connie is totally hot. I want to pat her curls, too.
I love John's reactions throughout, actually, and I like that a lot of things aren't spelled out in big giant letters for the reader. John figures out what's going on but he doesn't *tell* us, and you are smart enough as a writer to know that we can follow along without hitting us over the head. It's interesting to see Matt as more sure of himself, too.
"It's a thing. We have a thing." -- oh Matt, you are so adorable.
Well call the record books! Alert the media! Can it be that Snick has created an OC that Severina LIKES!? Further details to follow on this shocking turn of events
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This fic is a nice long...leisurely sounds like a negative word, but I certainly don' t mean it that way. It's more like an antidote to the way they met, the urgency and the craziness. They needed something slow and gentle and a little quiet to finally come together. I also liked Connie and Kennedy.
Thanks so much, what a great way of putting it. There was definitely a bit of 'what they are like when they are not getting shot at' in this. And yes it was definitely not urgent. One of my lowest-stakes pieces so far. It makes it less cathartic, but it was kind of interesting doing something different (and not having Matt be a giant spaz).
Heh thank you, you never know how people are going to take an OC, so I'm glad Kennedy worked for you. And more Connie is always a win. :)
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I love love LOVE the whole first section of this more than is healthy. Love Kennedy and Matt's patter and John's reactions. Kennedy is a nicely realized OC and hello, Connie is totally hot. I want to pat her curls, too.
I love John's reactions throughout, actually, and I like that a lot of things aren't spelled out in big giant letters for the reader. John figures out what's going on but he doesn't *tell* us, and you are smart enough as a writer to know that we can follow along without hitting us over the head. It's interesting to see Matt as more sure of himself, too.
"It's a thing. We have a thing." -- oh Matt, you are so adorable.
Well done, you. *muah*
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Heh thank you, you never know how people are going to take an OC, so I'm glad Kennedy worked for you. And more Connie is always a win. :)
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