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Time To Mend

Sep 18, 2009 06:22

Who_Daily Link: < a href="http://persiflage-1.livejournal.com/296704.html">Time to Mend by < lj user=persiflage_1> (Characters: Eleventh Doctor, Amy, Alt-Ten, Martha, Rose | Rating: PG | Spoilers: S2 - S5 ( Read more... )

character: rose tyler, character: amy pond, fic: au s5, character: martha jones, character: eleventh doctor

Comments 36

box_in_the_box September 18 2009, 05:48:57 UTC

In addition to all the praise you'll get from everyone else, let me say that your characterization of Eleven is interesting. You obviously were paying attention to his flittering fingers in his interview clips, and whether you realize it or not, you've given him a very Davison-esque personality, which fits Moffat's fandom love of Five.

persiflage_1 September 18 2009, 05:52:54 UTC

I was paying attention to his fingers - kinda hard to miss them, actually!

And yes, I did try to make him a mixture of Five and Ten (because he resembles Ten somewhat in physical build)...

mulder200 September 18 2009, 05:53:07 UTC

That was wonderful! Reading your stories makes me wish the show was this good.

persiflage_1 September 18 2009, 05:54:01 UTC

Thank you!

tardis_mafia September 18 2009, 05:59:51 UTC

He is home. :D A great fic as usual! I love how Amy's so cute and shy; she and Martha would make very good friends, methinks. I just hope she's like that on the show...

And poor Handy for being deserted on Estrela! *HUGS HIM*

persiflage_1 September 18 2009, 06:06:09 UTC

I like to think that Martha could be friends with any former companion of the Doctor...

I felt bad for Handy stuck in that awful place, but at least he had Marfa to heal him...

abstruse_fangrl September 18 2009, 06:05:15 UTC

My love for this fic overfloweth! :D

From the characterization of Ten, to the, ahem, comeuppance of a certain companion, to the professionalism of Martha Jones - just so much awesome.

I did like the 'prove you're the Doctor' pop quiz that Martha put Eleven through. She's one tough cookie!

persiflage_1 September 18 2009, 06:12:47 UTC

From the characterization of Ten, to the, ahem, comeuppance of a certain companion, to the professionalism of Martha Jones - just so much awesome.

Characterisation of Ten? Did you mean Eleven?

Martha is the consummate professional!

I did like the 'prove you're the Doctor' pop quiz that Martha put Eleven through. She's one tough cookie!

Oh yes!!

abstruse_fangrl September 18 2009, 06:14:42 UTC

Indeed I did! Apparently there's not a lot going on upstairs with me tonight! XD

persiflage_1 September 18 2009, 06:15:48 UTC

*giggles*

yalegirl03 September 18 2009, 06:07:15 UTC

Wow. You really don't like Rose. LOL. Neither do I, really. My fave is Martha followed by Donna. This story was good and I think you relayed Rose's selfishness well. She was just very immature. Perhaps that is why I like Donna and Martha. They were independent grown women.
Do you plan a sequel for how Jon gets along?

persiflage_1 September 18 2009, 06:10:22 UTC

I don't like S2 and S4 Rose (S1 isn't so bad, but Ten & Rose just make me shudder)... And actually, this is toned down from the original synopsis I wrote...

Yes, Rose was selfish and immature and I wish more people would realise that and realise that it's *not* a good thing!

I'm not particularly planning a sequel - will have to see how the plot bunnies bite me!