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Child's Play (2/2)

Sep 13, 2009 08:01

Who_Daily Link: < a href="http://persiflage-1.livejournal.com/294941.html">Child's Play (2/2) by < lj user=persiflage_1> (Characters: Martha, Ten, Other Characters | Rating: PG | Spoilers: None ( Read more... )

character: jamie jones (oc), fic: post s4 au, character: tenth doctor, character: francine jones, character: martha jones, series: child of time

Comments 27

abstruse_fangrl September 13 2009, 07:34:12 UTC

persiflage_1 September 13 2009, 08:24:44 UTC

Things I thoroughly enjoyed:

* the relationship dynamic between Martha & the Doctor
* the relationship between Jamie & Ten
* Ten admitting that he probably would run away every now and again in the TARDIS
* How much the TARDIS loves Jamie! Because she knows his mom totally kicks ass! She luffs her Martha Jones. *grins*

Yup! TARDIS/Martha 4 eva! :D

I'm not usually big on kid!fic, but you did such a great job of writing the relationship dynamics and making this fun and domestic (in its way) and realistic!

Given I'm not usually big on kid!fic either, perhaps I should start touting this as 'kid!fic for those who aren't fond of kid!fic"?

I tried to make it realistically domestic - because I think Ten's lonely (more so after losing DoctorDonna), so he craves the contact with Jamie and Martha (esp Jamie since he's clearly part-Time Lord too), but at the same time, he's scared of commitment and even more scared of hurting Martha again...

In fact, this was so much fun, I may have to go back now and read it again. :D

Nut!

tardis_mafia September 13 2009, 07:40:28 UTC

That was absolutely worth waiting for. The bond between father and son was so sweet. I loved every bit of it...

How long will it be before the Doctor lets his son pilot the TARDIS? :P

persiflage_1 September 13 2009, 08:25:45 UTC

I'm glad you enjoyed it...

How long will it be before the Doctor lets his son pilot the TARDIS? :P

Maybe the more interesting question is how long will it be before the TARDIS lets Jamie pilot her?!

garpu September 13 2009, 08:30:36 UTC

Can't say I'm a huge fan of most kidfic, either, but I liked this...I do think the Doctor was either a really awesome dad, or completely negligent. :)

persiflage_1 September 13 2009, 08:35:16 UTC

Glad you liked it!

I think maybe the Doctor was negligent the first time round (but this time around he's trying to make up for it!)

mulder200 September 13 2009, 12:12:17 UTC

I'm not a huge fan of kids in sci-fi because they are usually annoying. However, I really liked your Jamie. He's so cute and cool.

And I just the domesticity of The Doctor and Martha. The Doctor will always be the Doctor no matter what.

persiflage_1 September 13 2009, 13:47:27 UTC

I'm glad you like Jamie!

Yes, the Doctor will always be himself...

mischief89 September 13 2009, 15:23:09 UTC

Aaaw I liked this! I was loved when the Doctor gave Jamie a piggy back ride and he was holding on too tight. Madison totally does that!

I think it's sweet that he's becoming more like his father as he gets older and that he loves learning about things from the Doctor's past!

persiflage_1 September 13 2009, 15:27:55 UTC

Yeah my brother used to do it too...

I think it's sweet that he's becoming more like his father as he gets older and that he loves learning about things from the Doctor's past!

He's definitely his father's son, as well as his mother's!