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Tempus Edax Rerum 1: Time Sensitive

Aug 01, 2009 19:57

Who_Daily Link: < a href="http://persiflage-1.livejournal.com/280707.html">Tempus Edax Rerum 1: Time Sensitive by < lj user=persiflage_1> (Characters: Martha Jones, Eighth Doctor, Romana II, Autons | Rating: PG | Spoilers: BFA: The Girl Who Never Was ( Read more... )

fic genre: adventure, fic genre: au, character: eighth doctor, series: tempus edax rerum, character: martha jones, character: romana ii

Comments 32

catholicphoton August 1 2009, 20:36:44 UTC

First let me say, Martha is a Big Damn Hero :-)

1. The interaction between Eight and Romana is pure love :-) I love how she has him so well figured out that she can talk him into doing things he'd rather not do. *cracks whip*

2. The comment about tenatcles made me ROFL ;-)

3. Autons, crowds, speeding cars, scared kids, officious jerks...is there anything or anyone Martha can't pwn? I don't think so!

4. David Macdonald FTW!

5. The pacing is great, there so much going on, but it just flows so seamlessly :-)

persiflage_1 August 1 2009, 20:41:58 UTC

First comment! :D

First let me say, Martha is a Big Damn Hero :-)

She certainly is!

1. The interaction between Eight and Romana is pure love :-) I love how she has him so well figured out that she can talk him into doing things he'd rather not do. *cracks whip*

*giggles* I knew endlessly listening to 'Shada' would pay off!

2. The comment about tenatcles made me ROFL ;-)

*grins* Tentacles seemed like an obviously alien thing for Martha to think he would be hiding...

3. Autons, crowds, speeding cars, scared kids, officious jerks...is there anything or anyone Martha can't pwn? I don't think so!

No, for she is Doctor of Pwnage!

4. David Macdonald FTW!

I didn't think he'd mind since he doesn't use the name himself! :D

5. The pacing is great, there so much going on, but it just flows so seamlessly :-)

Thank you...

And thank you for your encouragement and enthusiasm. Much appreciated!

mulder200 August 1 2009, 21:13:06 UTC

What an interesting premise and a fantastic beginning. I look forward to more.

persiflage_1 August 2 2009, 04:10:45 UTC

Thank you...

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persiflage_1 August 2 2009, 04:11:21 UTC

Thanks. It's not a re-write of Season 1 - nor of S3 - it's all AU.

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persiflage_1 August 2 2009, 06:45:41 UTC

Heh, thanks... I'm basically taking bits I like from the show (new and classic), audios and books - I figure since it's AU, I might as well!

tardis_mafia August 2 2009, 00:19:03 UTC

So much intensity in one chapter! I love it! I love the idea of Martha being Time Sensitive, and of course, the trust between the two. Sometimes I think Martha is just too awesome. ;)

Great job!

persiflage_1 August 2 2009, 04:12:28 UTC

Martha can never be too awesome!

I'm glad you enjoyed it.

supasass August 2 2009, 00:38:46 UTC

Really loving this. You've managed to pack in so much action, dialogue, character development and Martha BAMFery without overwhelming the story or the reading of it. I devoured it like a cool glass of wine after a hard day! Really very much looking forward to more - this is the first Eighth Doctor story I'm reading, so even more exciting :)

persiflage_1 August 2 2009, 04:14:14 UTC

Wow, thank you. I'm glad that you enjoyed it so much...

Eight is one of my favourite Doctors.