Fic: Secret Burn
Title: Secret Burn
Rating: PG-13 - for suggestiveness/innuendo and swearing
Word Count: 1,921
Warnings: If boys loving, kissing or touching one another offends you then don’t read... If this is the case, I ask “WHY ARE YOU HERE?!”
Summary: David is the only person Pierre trusts to do this really big favour for him
Disclaimer: I don’t own either of them, I'm making zero profit and this never happened. The only thing I possess the rights to is my own imagination and personal belief that these two go at it like sex-crazed bunnies.
Author Notes: Dialogue fic! Not sure how many people enjoy these but I love them. I wanted to post a different fic before this one but it's giving me a lot of grief editing it, so this will have to do for now. Also not sure about the title, any other suggestions are welcome! The first line is David, then Pierre, back to David... etc
“Pierre, are you sure you want to do this?”
“Yes David, for the last time I’m sure.”
“Are you really sure? Because I’d prefer to wait if-”
“-I’m not going to say it again! Can we just do this already?”
“Look, I know that the first time can be a little scary and if you wanted to wait a little bit longer, I’d totally understand.”
“I know you’re trying to do the right thing by me but honestly David, I don’t know how to say it any clearer. I’m ready. I have been for a while now.”
“...You have?”
“Yeah...”
“How, um... how long have you been wanting to do this?”
“Uh, quite a while now.”
“Why didn’t you say something sooner Pierre?”
“I guess... well like you said, the first time can be a little scary, and just because I felt like I was ready, didn’t really mean that I was you know? I suppose I wanted to make sure that I really did want it, you know?”
“Yeah, I do... Okay so, we’re really going to go through with this huh?”
“Yep. I mean, as long as you’re okay with it?”
“Of course I am. I really want this too.”
“I’m glad you want this just as much as I do. I want you to know that there’s no other person that I’d trust to do this with.”
“I know and I feel the same way about you.”
“I already knew that though.”
“I guess you did... Alright, now you know that there’s no backing out once we start this?”
“Yes David, I know.”
“I’m serious Pierre! I mean it okay, there’s absolutely no stopping!”
“David! I know!”
“I hear you saying it but do you mean it?”
“Yes, I mean it!”
“Because this won’t go down the way it did last time... This time around when you start pleading with me to stop ‘cause it hurts too damn much, I won’t have a bar of it. I’ll keep on going until I’m finished!”
“Last time was different and you know it.”
“Just because you were drunk doesn’t mean you get a ‘get out of jail free’ card.”
“...I wasn’t drunk”
“Were too.”
“Were not.”
“Were too.”
“...”
“Ha, I win.”
“Screw you.”
“Not today.”
“...That’s what you think.”
“Now, one more time Pierre. If we do this here and now we need to see it through - together. We can’t just stop halfway, it doesn’t work like that.”
“I won’t stop. I want this so badly I don’t think you could stop me if you tried.”
“Wow, dominant!Pierre... I like him.”
“I thought today was all about dominant!David?”
“Oh it is, don’t you worry about that.”
“I’m not worried.”
“That’s my wittle Pieface... I have to admit though, I never thought you’d ask me to do this for you. I mean I was a little shocked when you asked me.”
“I was just as surprised as you were but it just feels right. We need to do this... I just hope the guys don’t catch us.”
“What’s the big deal if they do? They’ve caught us before.”
“Yeah but that was different.”
“How is this different to the other times?”
“Come on David, they’d expect it from you but they’ve never seen me on the receiving end before... Heck I’ve never seen myself on the receiving end before.”
“Look, they won’t catch us alright, I promise. I’ll even lock and barricade the door. And even if they did, it’s nothing they haven’t seen before and I’m sure they’d understand. I don’t think they’d hold it against you Pierre.”
“No, I know they wouldn’t but it’s still kind of...”
“Kind of what?”
“Nothing, it’s nothing... Can we start now?”
“Sure, anything you want baby.”
“Ouch, Dahv!”
“I’m sorry, god I’m so sorry I didn’t mean to be that rough. I’m not used to doing this!”
“Bullshit! You do this at least once a fucking day!”
“Hey! There’s no need to fucking swear at me... and besides, it’s different when you do it to yourself.”
“I fail to see the difference.”
“Trust me, there is. There’s a whole other technique and skill required to do it yourself, it’s all in the wrist you see... is that better?”
“Oh wow... Um, yeah... a lot better actually... It’s kinda starting to feel...”
“Nice?”
“...”
“Did you just squeak?”
“...”
“Pierre?”
“No.”
“You did to. You just made a squeak noise.”
“No, I didn’t.”
“Oh my God, I don’t believe it, I actually made Pierre Bouvigay squeak with pleasure.”
“I thought you said you wouldn’t call me that anymore?”
“So you’re not denying the pleasure you’re feeling thanks to me and my awesome skills?”
“No, I never denied that. I just denied the noise I made is all... Hey why’d you stop? Keep going damn it!”
“Okay, okay... Jeez who knew you’d be so demanding?”
“... OWWW! What did you do that for?”
“Eek, sorry! Too hard I know. I got a little carried away is all.”
“A little? Fuck David.”
“I said I was sorry, gosh.”
“Ow, ow, ow! No, no, stop! Okay I’m done, stop now please?”
“Uh-uh, no way! Don’t you remember what we talked out before we started?”
“Yes I do, but I don’t give a shit now. I didn’t know it was going to be this painful.”
“Come on, the pain is a tiny sacrifice compared to the outcome and you know it.”
“No David please, it burns...”
“Okay now you’re exaggerating.”
“No, I’m really not. It fucking hurts so much.”
“Well it wouldn’t burn so much if you stopped pulling away from me. Just let me do it okay, if you keep pulling away then you’ll never get used to it and the pain won’t go away. I thought you trusted me with this?”
“I do, I do. But oh my God, why didn’t you tell me it hurt this bad?”
“Because I’m not a pussy and I never once complain about it when I let you do this to me.”
“I think you’re suffering from a major case of verb confusion here David. I believe you meant to say 'when you force me to do this to you.'”
“...”
“What’s the matter Dahv?”
“Is that really how you feel Pierre?”
“Huh, what do you mean?”
“...Do you really feel like I force you to do this to me?”
“No, that’s not what I said, you misunderstood-”
“-No I think I understood perfectly well.”
“I know what I said, but I didn’t mean it. I’m sorry. I was just frustrated is all... Fuck I wish I knew this was going to hurt this much.”
“...”
“...”
“Pierre?”
“Yeah?”
“Tell me the truth... do you only do this because you feel you need to?”
“I don’t understand what you’re asking me David.”
“Well, before you said I force you to do this. Do you mean that you don’t enjoy doing this to me? Do you only do it ‘cause it’s what I want?”
“No, no, no. I do love doing this with you, I really do. It just came out wrong, like I said I was frustrated with the pain. I love doing this for you which is why I wanted you to do it to me. I’m sorry baby... let’s keep going okay? I’m ready for more.”
“...Are you sure?”
“Never been surer about anything else.”
“Okay then... I’ll try to be a bit gentler on you.”
“You don’t have to be gentle...”
“Pierre Bouvier, are you trying to tell me you like it rough?”“Maybe just a little... but not too rough okay?”
“Okay... I’m almost done anyway so it won’t be too much longer I promise... Just hang in there...”
“Don’t you have something to put on it to I duno, make it go... smoother or something?”
“Bloody hell, you’re such a baby, honestly. I don’t think I could be doing this any gentler Pierre but if it makes you stop whining then I’m sure I can find something to use.”
“Thank you, David.”
“Yeah, yeah - I hear you... Oh hey, here we go.”
“...Are you kidding me?”
“What’s the matter?”
“...Strawberry?”
“What’s the matter with strawberry?”
“Come on, David! It’s a girly smell!”
“You don’t seem to mind when I’m the one smothered in the stuff.”
“Yeah but... You’re the girly one in this relationship, not me... it’s not right. I mean - strawberry - isn’t there anything else we can use?”
“Nope.”
“Really?”
“Really.”
“Damn.”
“Mhm, but it smells so yummy... I kinda want to lick it right off you.”
“Oh god David, that’s disgusting.”
“Hey, you’re the one who asked for it remember? Honestly though, smell how good it is.”
“Oh wow. You’re right, it is... yummy.”
“See... okay now, let me put some more on... there I think that will be enough, don’t you? ...How’s that, any better?”
“A lot better actually, thanks David... It’s not hurting so much now.”
“What can I say - I just have the magic touch.”
“I won’t argue with that.”
“...Okay, I’m almost done... Just a few more... Almost there... Finished.”
“That’s it?”
“What were you expecting a five mile triathlon?”
“No but... I just thought... I didn’t know you’d be finished so soon...”
“Well I could always start over and you know, do it again?”
“No, its fine.”
“You sure? I don’t mind.”
“No, it’s okay David.”
“Okay then... So, how was it... for your first time I mean?”
“Um, I’m not really sure... I’m still kinda, coming to terms with it.”
“Oh.”
“What?”
“You didn’t enjoy it?”
“I think so, yeah... I’m just not used to the idea yet, that’s all... But I definitely didn’t hate it.”
“So I did good then?”
“Oh, you did fantastically good! Thanks baby.”
“Anytime Teddybear.”
“Okay, you need to stop with the names.”
“Not going to happen, sorry.”
“I had fun though... I didn’t think I would, but I really did.”
“That’s ‘cause I made it fun.”
“I won’t deny that.”
“So...”
“So what?”
“Well seeing as you ‘had fun’ do you want to maybe try this again sometime... like, oh say tomorrow?”
“Tomorrow?! So soon... don’t you think we should wait a little longer than one day to do this again?”
“No.”
“You don’t?”
“No. I mean I do it most days and I don’t have any problems.”
“I guess... Well it can’t hurt to try again tomorrow, I suppose.”
“Yay! I’m excited!”
“David, get down... No seriously, stop jumping on the bed.”
“I’m sorry Pie, I’m just really really excited.”
“Wow, if I knew that this would’ve made you so happy, I would’ve asked you do this month’s ago.”
“Well now we can do it every day!”
“Okay, you’re getting way too excited over this.”
“Hey, it’s not every day that you’re boyfriend asks you to straighten his hair for him!”
“You know that nobody can know about this right?”
“...”
“David?”
“Uh, it might be a bit late for that...”
“What did you do?!”
“I uh... I might’ve hacked into your twitter and-”
“DAVID?!”
“What?”
“You tweeted that you just straightened my hair?!”
“Maybe.”
“I hate you!”
“You know you don’t mean that.”
“Want a bet?”
“Well, if you really hate me then I’ll never straighten your hair for you again.”
“Fine, I’ll do it myself from now on!”
“Oh really?”
“...Maybe... Maybe I don’t really hate you.”
“Does that mean you love me?”
“Maybe.”
“Maybes not going to cut it this time! If you want me to-”
“-Shut up and kiss me already.”
“...Hey that’s cheating.”
Rating: PG-13 - for suggestiveness/innuendo and swearing
Word Count: 1,921
Warnings: If boys loving, kissing or touching one another offends you then don’t read... If this is the case, I ask “WHY ARE YOU HERE?!”
Summary: David is the only person Pierre trusts to do this really big favour for him
Disclaimer: I don’t own either of them, I'm making zero profit and this never happened. The only thing I possess the rights to is my own imagination and personal belief that these two go at it like sex-crazed bunnies.
Author Notes: Dialogue fic! Not sure how many people enjoy these but I love them. I wanted to post a different fic before this one but it's giving me a lot of grief editing it, so this will have to do for now. Also not sure about the title, any other suggestions are welcome! The first line is David, then Pierre, back to David... etc
“Pierre, are you sure you want to do this?”
“Yes David, for the last time I’m sure.”
“Are you really sure? Because I’d prefer to wait if-”
“-I’m not going to say it again! Can we just do this already?”
“Look, I know that the first time can be a little scary and if you wanted to wait a little bit longer, I’d totally understand.”
“I know you’re trying to do the right thing by me but honestly David, I don’t know how to say it any clearer. I’m ready. I have been for a while now.”
“...You have?”
“Yeah...”
“How, um... how long have you been wanting to do this?”
“Uh, quite a while now.”
“Why didn’t you say something sooner Pierre?”
“I guess... well like you said, the first time can be a little scary, and just because I felt like I was ready, didn’t really mean that I was you know? I suppose I wanted to make sure that I really did want it, you know?”
“Yeah, I do... Okay so, we’re really going to go through with this huh?”
“Yep. I mean, as long as you’re okay with it?”
“Of course I am. I really want this too.”
“I’m glad you want this just as much as I do. I want you to know that there’s no other person that I’d trust to do this with.”
“I know and I feel the same way about you.”
“I already knew that though.”
“I guess you did... Alright, now you know that there’s no backing out once we start this?”
“Yes David, I know.”
“I’m serious Pierre! I mean it okay, there’s absolutely no stopping!”
“David! I know!”
“I hear you saying it but do you mean it?”
“Yes, I mean it!”
“Because this won’t go down the way it did last time... This time around when you start pleading with me to stop ‘cause it hurts too damn much, I won’t have a bar of it. I’ll keep on going until I’m finished!”
“Last time was different and you know it.”
“Just because you were drunk doesn’t mean you get a ‘get out of jail free’ card.”
“...I wasn’t drunk”
“Were too.”
“Were not.”
“Were too.”
“...”
“Ha, I win.”
“Screw you.”
“Not today.”
“...That’s what you think.”
“Now, one more time Pierre. If we do this here and now we need to see it through - together. We can’t just stop halfway, it doesn’t work like that.”
“I won’t stop. I want this so badly I don’t think you could stop me if you tried.”
“Wow, dominant!Pierre... I like him.”
“I thought today was all about dominant!David?”
“Oh it is, don’t you worry about that.”
“I’m not worried.”
“That’s my wittle Pieface... I have to admit though, I never thought you’d ask me to do this for you. I mean I was a little shocked when you asked me.”
“I was just as surprised as you were but it just feels right. We need to do this... I just hope the guys don’t catch us.”
“What’s the big deal if they do? They’ve caught us before.”
“Yeah but that was different.”
“How is this different to the other times?”
“Come on David, they’d expect it from you but they’ve never seen me on the receiving end before... Heck I’ve never seen myself on the receiving end before.”
“Look, they won’t catch us alright, I promise. I’ll even lock and barricade the door. And even if they did, it’s nothing they haven’t seen before and I’m sure they’d understand. I don’t think they’d hold it against you Pierre.”
“No, I know they wouldn’t but it’s still kind of...”
“Kind of what?”
“Nothing, it’s nothing... Can we start now?”
“Sure, anything you want baby.”
“Ouch, Dahv!”
“I’m sorry, god I’m so sorry I didn’t mean to be that rough. I’m not used to doing this!”
“Bullshit! You do this at least once a fucking day!”
“Hey! There’s no need to fucking swear at me... and besides, it’s different when you do it to yourself.”
“I fail to see the difference.”
“Trust me, there is. There’s a whole other technique and skill required to do it yourself, it’s all in the wrist you see... is that better?”
“Oh wow... Um, yeah... a lot better actually... It’s kinda starting to feel...”
“Nice?”
“...”
“Did you just squeak?”
“...”
“Pierre?”
“No.”
“You did to. You just made a squeak noise.”
“No, I didn’t.”
“Oh my God, I don’t believe it, I actually made Pierre Bouvigay squeak with pleasure.”
“I thought you said you wouldn’t call me that anymore?”
“So you’re not denying the pleasure you’re feeling thanks to me and my awesome skills?”
“No, I never denied that. I just denied the noise I made is all... Hey why’d you stop? Keep going damn it!”
“Okay, okay... Jeez who knew you’d be so demanding?”
“... OWWW! What did you do that for?”
“Eek, sorry! Too hard I know. I got a little carried away is all.”
“A little? Fuck David.”
“I said I was sorry, gosh.”
“Ow, ow, ow! No, no, stop! Okay I’m done, stop now please?”
“Uh-uh, no way! Don’t you remember what we talked out before we started?”
“Yes I do, but I don’t give a shit now. I didn’t know it was going to be this painful.”
“Come on, the pain is a tiny sacrifice compared to the outcome and you know it.”
“No David please, it burns...”
“Okay now you’re exaggerating.”
“No, I’m really not. It fucking hurts so much.”
“Well it wouldn’t burn so much if you stopped pulling away from me. Just let me do it okay, if you keep pulling away then you’ll never get used to it and the pain won’t go away. I thought you trusted me with this?”
“I do, I do. But oh my God, why didn’t you tell me it hurt this bad?”
“Because I’m not a pussy and I never once complain about it when I let you do this to me.”
“I think you’re suffering from a major case of verb confusion here David. I believe you meant to say 'when you force me to do this to you.'”
“...”
“What’s the matter Dahv?”
“Is that really how you feel Pierre?”
“Huh, what do you mean?”
“...Do you really feel like I force you to do this to me?”
“No, that’s not what I said, you misunderstood-”
“-No I think I understood perfectly well.”
“I know what I said, but I didn’t mean it. I’m sorry. I was just frustrated is all... Fuck I wish I knew this was going to hurt this much.”
“...”
“...”
“Pierre?”
“Yeah?”
“Tell me the truth... do you only do this because you feel you need to?”
“I don’t understand what you’re asking me David.”
“Well, before you said I force you to do this. Do you mean that you don’t enjoy doing this to me? Do you only do it ‘cause it’s what I want?”
“No, no, no. I do love doing this with you, I really do. It just came out wrong, like I said I was frustrated with the pain. I love doing this for you which is why I wanted you to do it to me. I’m sorry baby... let’s keep going okay? I’m ready for more.”
“...Are you sure?”
“Never been surer about anything else.”
“Okay then... I’ll try to be a bit gentler on you.”
“You don’t have to be gentle...”
“Pierre Bouvier, are you trying to tell me you like it rough?”“Maybe just a little... but not too rough okay?”
“Okay... I’m almost done anyway so it won’t be too much longer I promise... Just hang in there...”
“Don’t you have something to put on it to I duno, make it go... smoother or something?”
“Bloody hell, you’re such a baby, honestly. I don’t think I could be doing this any gentler Pierre but if it makes you stop whining then I’m sure I can find something to use.”
“Thank you, David.”
“Yeah, yeah - I hear you... Oh hey, here we go.”
“...Are you kidding me?”
“What’s the matter?”
“...Strawberry?”
“What’s the matter with strawberry?”
“Come on, David! It’s a girly smell!”
“You don’t seem to mind when I’m the one smothered in the stuff.”
“Yeah but... You’re the girly one in this relationship, not me... it’s not right. I mean - strawberry - isn’t there anything else we can use?”
“Nope.”
“Really?”
“Really.”
“Damn.”
“Mhm, but it smells so yummy... I kinda want to lick it right off you.”
“Oh god David, that’s disgusting.”
“Hey, you’re the one who asked for it remember? Honestly though, smell how good it is.”
“Oh wow. You’re right, it is... yummy.”
“See... okay now, let me put some more on... there I think that will be enough, don’t you? ...How’s that, any better?”
“A lot better actually, thanks David... It’s not hurting so much now.”
“What can I say - I just have the magic touch.”
“I won’t argue with that.”
“...Okay, I’m almost done... Just a few more... Almost there... Finished.”
“That’s it?”
“What were you expecting a five mile triathlon?”
“No but... I just thought... I didn’t know you’d be finished so soon...”
“Well I could always start over and you know, do it again?”
“No, its fine.”
“You sure? I don’t mind.”
“No, it’s okay David.”
“Okay then... So, how was it... for your first time I mean?”
“Um, I’m not really sure... I’m still kinda, coming to terms with it.”
“Oh.”
“What?”
“You didn’t enjoy it?”
“I think so, yeah... I’m just not used to the idea yet, that’s all... But I definitely didn’t hate it.”
“So I did good then?”
“Oh, you did fantastically good! Thanks baby.”
“Anytime Teddybear.”
“Okay, you need to stop with the names.”
“Not going to happen, sorry.”
“I had fun though... I didn’t think I would, but I really did.”
“That’s ‘cause I made it fun.”
“I won’t deny that.”
“So...”
“So what?”
“Well seeing as you ‘had fun’ do you want to maybe try this again sometime... like, oh say tomorrow?”
“Tomorrow?! So soon... don’t you think we should wait a little longer than one day to do this again?”
“No.”
“You don’t?”
“No. I mean I do it most days and I don’t have any problems.”
“I guess... Well it can’t hurt to try again tomorrow, I suppose.”
“Yay! I’m excited!”
“David, get down... No seriously, stop jumping on the bed.”
“I’m sorry Pie, I’m just really really excited.”
“Wow, if I knew that this would’ve made you so happy, I would’ve asked you do this month’s ago.”
“Well now we can do it every day!”
“Okay, you’re getting way too excited over this.”
“Hey, it’s not every day that you’re boyfriend asks you to straighten his hair for him!”
“You know that nobody can know about this right?”
“...”
“David?”
“Uh, it might be a bit late for that...”
“What did you do?!”
“I uh... I might’ve hacked into your twitter and-”
“DAVID?!”
“What?”
“You tweeted that you just straightened my hair?!”
“Maybe.”
“I hate you!”
“You know you don’t mean that.”
“Want a bet?”
“Well, if you really hate me then I’ll never straighten your hair for you again.”
“Fine, I’ll do it myself from now on!”
“Oh really?”
“...Maybe... Maybe I don’t really hate you.”
“Does that mean you love me?”
“Maybe.”
“Maybes not going to cut it this time! If you want me to-”
“-Shut up and kiss me already.”
“...Hey that’s cheating.”