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Fic: The Luckiest [2/2] Harry Potter [Percy/Oliver]

Oct 01, 2009 14:36

Title: The Luckiest [2/2]
Author: Perpetual Motion
Fandom: Harry Potter
Pairing: Percy/Oliver
Rating: R
Summary: A direct sequel to " In Between Days" in which the war is over, but not really and book 7 continues to be completely ignored. Percy works for the Ministry, Oliver is a touch shady, Tonks and Shacklebolt prove their level of badass, and ( Read more... )

harry potter, percy/oliver, ben folds universe

Comments 19

songspinner9 October 2 2009, 01:04:17 UTC

Oh, but this was marvelous! I was hoping this would be here when I got home. :)
Great characterization and a good flow, and I loved the darkness and the sense of humour combined. I don't often like AU's to this 'verse, but yours seems very, very, possible and in character.

perpet_fic October 3 2009, 15:57:43 UTC

Thank you so much! What great feedback! I'm so happy the humor and the darkness worked well together, and I'm a little proud to know you were waiting for the rest of it to post. I'm so happy you liked it!

secretsolitaire October 2 2009, 01:47:30 UTC

I enjoyed this so much -- there's something very quiet and warm about it. Percy and Oliver are so sweet together. And even though the twins don't get much screen time in this, I adored every sentence they were in. :-)

perpet_fic October 3 2009, 15:58:49 UTC

Thank you so much! Percy and Oliver are just kinda...cuddly? I'm not really sure what word I need there, but I would definitely use "warm". I'm so glad you enjoyed the twins. I had planned to use them more, but they decided to stay away until I really needed a good line.

maevemist October 2 2009, 10:48:19 UTC

I think you did a wonderful job with this. I have not read the original story but I am definitely going to now. I really liked your characterisations of everyone. I liked the subtle ways you showed each characters unique traits, Percy's seriousness and almost innocence in the ways of romance, Tonks' clumsiness and Seamus' love of a good drink as just a few examples. Your OC was very cool as well.

Honestly, I could go on and on about all the small details in this story that I enjoyed but I will not bore you.

I will simply say that I think this is very well written and I am looking forward to checking out your other pieces in the near future.

perpet_fic October 3 2009, 16:01:53 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm so happy you liked everyone; especially the OC, they can be so difficult to sell sometimes. I also adore Percy's mostly-inoccence in romance. He's so analytical I imagine he gets blindsided romantically a lot.

If you have any interest in Charlie/Draco or Snape/Hermione, I'm working on stories with them that are set in this universe. The whole thing kind of ballooned on me, but it's been fun!

mayachain October 2 2009, 13:44:16 UTC

I enjoyed this every bit as much as the prequel. Wonderful take on the Ministry workings, ways to relate to the notcallingthemMuggles, and the darker side of being victorious in a war.

perpet_fic October 3 2009, 16:02:49 UTC

Thank you so much! I could not be happier that people are enjoying the darker bits. Which, when I type it out, sounds kind of weird, but I think you know what I mean.

I'm so happy you enjoyed it!

rhapsody032590 October 2 2009, 15:59:09 UTC

Quite stuning, i enjoyed this story greatly, its one of the best i've read recently. I love this AU, I know there's not a lot more to tell, but honestly i'd love to see more of it.

perpet_fic October 3 2009, 16:04:19 UTC

What wonderful feedback! Thank you!

I don't currently have plans to write more Percy/Oliver in this universe, but I am working on Charlie/Draco and Snape/Hermione in this universe. The whole thing's kind of grown legs on its own, and I'm just following it around to see what's up.