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Bleach- "For Mayuri"

Nov 11, 2006 12:25

Title: For Mayuri
Universe: Bleach
Theme/Topic: Parallel piece to "Meet the Captain” and “Meet Kenpachi” and in a way “Captain’s Meeting”.
Rating: PG
Character/Pairing/s: Mayuri, Kenpachi, Nemu, Yachiru in spirit.
Spoilers: Whole Soul Society Arc
Word Count: 3,151
Time: about 2.5 hours in a mad writing frenzy. I did this even before I washed my ( Read more... )

nemu, mayuri, kenpachi, bleach, yachiru

Comments 22

sophiap November 11 2006, 21:22:59 UTC

So much love. I like the fact that your Mayuri, while completely amoral, isn't exactly evil, per se. He comes across as quite smart and quite practical as well as being unethical. It's nice to see that side of things given a bit more attention.

Another thing I love is that you have so much of Zaraki being smart in his own way. I love that he was able to follow Nemu's explanation, and I love the way he saw through her BS about the hair as well as the BS she was feeding herself about not caring if she lived or died.

peroxidepest17 November 12 2006, 00:39:43 UTC

I don't see Mayuri as evil, just singleminded in his pursuits. Which I guess, can cause one to act in such ways that seem evil, but in the end I find him more egotistical than anything else. XD He just wants his glory.

And Kenpachi always knows. He just has to decide whether he cares or not, I think. XD

karaq November 11 2006, 21:44:28 UTC

I want a Zaraki on my own! *pout*
Great story. I love how you portray the characters. :-)

~KaraQ

peroxidepest17 November 12 2006, 00:37:29 UTC

Everyone wants a Zaraki! XD

148km November 11 2006, 21:56:49 UTC

Not unlike Kusajisa-fukutaichou. Kusajishi. ^^;

Your Nemu is so cute! Amplified by Kenpachi, I'm sure. :3 ♥

Once again, SCIENCE!! 8D ♥♥

peroxide_fic November 12 2006, 00:35:19 UTC

LOL Nemu is kind of a pain in the ass to write to be honest, but I've had good teachers. >>

cheloya November 12 2006, 00:41:57 UTC

Should it worry me that you make Mayuri's theory make absolute sense? XD;

You Kenpachi is the best and only Kenpachi. ♥ You write the thugs so well.

peroxidepest17 November 12 2006, 00:43:08 UTC

LOL I'm just glad it DOES. Cuz I worry that sometimes the only person I make sense to is myself. XD;;

eternalsayonara November 12 2006, 01:59:14 UTC

Their inability to precisely control the rate of their reiatsu emanation-it’s direction and concentration.

"its".

“Woman, I gotta live and work with Yumichika pretty much 24-7. So my bullshit meter is pretty goddamned high considerin’.”

That's such an awesome line. XD

Intriguing fic. :3

peroxidepest17 November 12 2006, 02:17:06 UTC

LOL I know english. Rly. >>