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Bleach- "In a Moment of Weakness"

Oct 31, 2006 16:15

Title: In a Moment of Weakness
Author: Peroxidepest17
Universe: Bleach
Rating: PG-13
Pairing/Character/s: Rikichi, with some ByakuyaxRenji and one-sided (sort of) Rikichi+Renji in the periphery.
Word Count: 1,437
Warning/s: Vague spoilers for the SS arc, but nothing important. Also, very possibly OOC and kind of dark but in a cracky sort of way ( Read more... )

byakuya, rikichi, bleach, renji, byakuyaxrenji

Comments 14

cheloya November 1 2006, 01:13:36 UTC

;_; Oh, Rikichi... *clings* I always forget how much I love that kid, and then you bring him back and I go all kajdfhasdh.

Didn't notice any edits; was too busy noticing how much I loved Rikichi again. ♥

peroxidepest17 November 2 2006, 03:19:35 UTC

LOL I probably only have soph to thank for the lack of edits. ^_^ She saved me big time on this one. >>

from jeina anonymous November 1 2006, 02:09:31 UTC

You made rikichi so serious when all i remember is him swishing around that hell-butterfly thingy =)So yeah, ooc....but strangely enough, not cracky. I love how you make it so plausible....seriously, it could be canon with the way you do your thang~

Re: from jeina peroxidepest17 November 2 2006, 03:20:09 UTC

Well, the theme was darker stuff. Admittedly it was hard to write cuz I only see Rikichi as big and dorkful and loserish too, but you know! I had to maybe work the OOC angle to make it fit into the Halloween exchange thing. XD

annapeace November 1 2006, 03:08:38 UTC

I love Rikichi and well, no one ever writes him! I love your portrayl of him. He's Hanatarou's boyfriend in my head...I forget why it worked, but they'd be cute together!

peroxidepest17 November 2 2006, 03:20:45 UTC

LOL to be honest I didn't even remember who he was for the longest time, but certain people out in fandom pounded it back into my brain. XD

eternalsayonara November 1 2006, 03:23:31 UTC

Waaaah. That's so sad. *sniffles* ;~;

peroxidepest17 November 2 2006, 03:20:57 UTC

The life of a loser, I guess. xD

tyreling November 3 2006, 19:01:22 UTC

Poor, poor Rikichi. Love the description. Love the angst. T__T And then the line “How do I become like you?”
I can really see this happening even though Rikichi doesn't have a lot of screen time/panels. Nice work.

peroxidepest17 November 3 2006, 19:11:40 UTC

I guess him not having a lot of screen time helped me out a little bit on this. I could just kind of wing it on the characterization that way. XD

tyreling November 5 2006, 02:08:11 UTC

Yes, it does. Need more fic about him.

peroxidepest17 November 5 2006, 02:18:55 UTC

I'm sure it's out there. He has more fangirls than I would have first imagined, I think. >>