Bleach Drabble (477-478)

[peroxide_fic]

Two down, two more to go!

ARGH WORK TOMORROW! *working as fast as physically possible*

477.

Title: Doctor’s Orders
Rating: PG-15
Pairing/Character/s: KomamuraxUnohana.
Word Count: 897
Warning/s: No spoilers I can imagine.
Summary: Komamura and his yearly physical exam.
Dedication: sophiap- haha your one liners are always the best part of the week,

Comments

[jen_kat]

Haha, is that "Unknown LJ Tag" supposed to be me? XD;
I liked the IchiRuki one. ^^ And even if I'm selling them, doesn't mean I don't like the pairing anymore. I'm just moving out of my Bleach fandom a bit more..

[peroxide_fic]

That was supposed to be you, as you can see now. LOL

Glad you still like. ^^

[skadihelias]

I love both!!! Very very much!!!

The first one made me laugh so hard, my friend who was staying in my boarding house stared at me funnily. Oh, you've made me love this pairing, obviously XD

He cleared his throat. “Twice a week, when I behave.”

“And when you don’t?”

He almost grinned. “Three or four.”

XD 100x

[peroxidepest17]

Glad you liked! XD

[eternalsayonara]

Ahaha, I never really imagined Unohana to be the girlfriend type. She seems asexual to me. (Not that that's a bad thing.) BUT YOU'RE RIGHT, IT COULD BE SWEET.

Like some sort of secret for those who weren’t filthy, who couldn’t still feel the blood of their loved ones on their skins and under it, behind their eyelids when they slept.

Wow. What powerful imagery. And throughout the rest of the story as well. *_*

Just like that-- way or another-- she would always find her way here.

"One"?

I really liked this one. Even if I probably don't get it get it. :O

[peroxidepest17]

I guess speed writing doesn't help my already screwed up typing skills. ^_^;; Thanks for the catch!

[ainbthen]

Wow. I liked that, a lot! Not at all what I thought you might think about when I gave the prompt, but as usual, you've taken off and created a great thing! Wonderful stuff, and it's nice to see some of their earlier history referenced. Especially that scene, which was definitely powerful, especially for Rukia, as you've shown here. So good!

[peroxidepest17]

I really liked that moment between them, I think... probably one of the things that first sold me on IchixRuki, next to the juice box scenario. They're just so healthy for one another. XD

[maidenofirisa]

These are both awesome!

The first one made me laugh out loud. Unohana is the best. It's really great to see Komamura in a humorous scenario. I wasn't sure about it when I read the pairing but I'm glad I gave it a shot.

The second one is just beautiful. I've never been a big Rukia fan but I adore her in this.

[peroxidepest17]

Komamura is pretty adorable, I think... probably all those omakes with him in it being a dork that did me in. XD