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Ouran/Yami no Matsuei- "Ouran Academy Guest Lecturers Series- Biomedical Research (Muraki Kazutaka)"

Jul 30, 2006 21:19

I think there is something fundamentally wrong with this fic. But it took like, FOREVER to write. So, I'm posting it anyway. Bear with me. XD

Title: Ouran Academy Guest Lecturers Series- Biomedical Research (Muraki Kazutaka)
Universe: Ouran High School Host Club/Yami no Matsuei
Theme/Topic: N/A
Rating: PG-13
Character/Pairing/s: Muraki, ( Read more... )

haruhi, muraki, nekozawa, murakixtamaki, kyouya, hikaru, murakixtsuzuki, hikaruxkaoru, mori, yami no matsuei, morixhoney, ouran, kaoru, renge, twins, tamaki, honey

Comments 61

pajee July 31 2006, 05:20:18 UTC

Uwah... the first one was the crackiest. The second was amusing. This one is down right creepy! But that's to be expected because Muraki's just creepy beyond words.

peroxide_fic July 31 2006, 06:59:13 UTC

I had to include someone completely creepy. XD

tenshineechan July 31 2006, 05:33:07 UTC

Have I told you how much I love you for starting this series? *checks* Oops, I'll comment on the other two later.
Again, I bow to your masterful characterisation. You really captured Muraki's pervy creepiness really well. Not to mention that I couldn't stop gushing over Muraki's attention to Tamaki *coughs*.

She wasn’t sure exactly how they’d take it of course-- because she fundamentally didn’t know about this kind of thing-- but it just seemed like the type of weirdo image that would appeal to them.
Haruhi you are so right, it is definitely a weirdo image that appeals.

Ok, so my niggling is back. Is it just me or is that every time I comment (making this one the third time), I niggle at you over typos and other errors?

Kyouya was very proud to introduce to the student and faculty of Ouran...
You've only written student indicating one. It should be pluralised as students or student body. Although students would make it read much better.

The first thing that struck him about the young man was two deep, deep violet eyes.It would be ( ... )

peroxide_fic July 31 2006, 06:54:47 UTC

No problem! I'm too lazy to edit myself. XD;;

shiroro July 31 2006, 05:36:32 UTC

I. . . I see shrooms.

And zomg I'm BLINDED WITH THE LOVE FOR Kazu-chan and Kyou-chan's glasses glints. . . XDDDD

And I love you too. XDDDD

peroxide_fic July 31 2006, 06:59:50 UTC

HAHA their glasses are entirely BLINDING. XD

I love you more. ♥ XD

mushrooms July 31 2006, 05:53:48 UTC

Oh. My. God. YnM and Ouran. Only you could pull this off. ♥ ♥ [Didn't comment on the other two because I was too busy laughing. XD]

P.S. Rite of passage. ♥

peroxide_fic July 31 2006, 06:58:51 UTC

Dyslexia=my middle name? XD;;

cruel_disorder July 31 2006, 06:06:49 UTC

Oh the poor kid who disappeared T_T;; But still, brilliant! I loved the last two, and I love this one too (even though I hate Muraki with a passion as a character XD;) Can't wait to see what's next~ There WILL be a next one, right? T^T

peroxidepest17 July 31 2006, 07:02:05 UTC

Haha we'll see! I have to um, muster up the guts to do another one. o.o