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Bleach Drabble (381-382)

Mar 19, 2006 16:38

I OBVIOUSLY don't want to work on ANYTHING productive this weekend.

Ahem.

381.

Title: Every Lesson Learned
Rating: PG-13
Pairing/Character/s: Eleventh Division
Word Count: 996
Warning/s: Possible look into the future, but no spoilers I can think of.
Summary: The eleventh division prepares you for life.
Dedication: idiosyn and meallanmouse- thanks for your ( Read more... )

kenpachi, ???xkira, ginxkira, kira, yumichika, bleach, eleventh division, yachiru, ikkaku

Comments 32

mei_yanohi March 20 2006, 03:36:55 UTC

He also taught her how to doctor the finance reports so they could get have that kegger next Friday

The "get have" is the only error I found. Good stuff here, good stuff! ELEVENTH!

peroxidepest17 March 20 2006, 05:45:56 UTC

Whoops, yes, I caught that. Haha apparently not fast enough tho. ;_;

*snickers* AND ELEVENTH LOVE! <3

amylee3000 March 20 2006, 04:41:24 UTC

The first one is now and officially my favorite Bleach fic in the entire Interworld.

None of my friends like the thugs as more than comic relief. I've heard quote "The name thing was sweet but he should have left her at an orphanage where she would be safe and grow up normal. It's sad how he warped her to the point where she can't possibly function in society."

And I'm like safe and normal be damned! She is happy and loved and how many "safe and normal" kids can say that. And my friends out vote me and tell me not to have kids ;_; They really don't get it.

ooh sorry for ranting in your comments and I liked the second one as well.:)

peroxidepest17 March 20 2006, 06:04:58 UTC

Well, they obviously don't understand the best parts of asian parenting! XD Beating sense into children and taking care of them at the same time all the way!

<3 Kenpachi. XD

carameltrap March 20 2006, 06:03:39 UTC

Nothing beats 11th Division fics. EVER. I love that they're one big happy family and yet people are shaking their heads at them. Can't you see the love?! XXD

peroxidepest17 March 20 2006, 06:05:23 UTC

Theirs is a misunderstood love, I suppose. XD

reiuji March 20 2006, 08:26:37 UTC

Renji & Kira make a perfect couple. ^_^
And Kenpachi is the best daddy ever. <3

peroxidepest17 March 21 2006, 01:38:39 UTC

Kenpachi is the best daddy ever! I have a lot of fun with him. As for Renji and Kira, Kira is sort of my fandom whore so there are lots of pairings I like him in. RenjixKira is one, I suppose. XD

flo_nelja March 20 2006, 08:43:35 UTC

The first one is very cute ! It's about themes that you already wrote a lot, but we don't get tired of this. :-)
And I love the idea of captain Kusajishi !

And for the second one... so, so hot... big thanks tou you and to para ! :-)
(But Renji is... I don't know. There is no ethical problem being kind of masochist, and he says it like it is a bad thing... Pffff... I'm not sure it's the best way to help Kira...)

peroxidepest17 March 21 2006, 01:39:45 UTC

Yesh... I am a bit repetitive in my love for the 11th, I suppose. But I figured it was different enough in that it was from Yachiru's perspective and not Kenpachi's for once. XD

As for Renji, I'm sure he's just sick of cute Kira-chan wanting to be hurt all the time. Thug mentality, you kno.

flo_nelja March 21 2006, 08:30:28 UTC

For the Renji/Kira one :

Yeah, but in my opinion, by making Kira feel so sorry and so filthy to ask for things like that, Renji only makes things worse, you know ? Because it's not good for self-esteem to have his kinks despised and his ex thrown in the face like this, not at all !
Renji has the right to tell he won't do that again and he doesn't like that, of course, but he should be the one to be sorry. :-(

peroxidepest17 March 21 2006, 08:39:58 UTC

I guess I got the image in my head where Kira as sort of like, that's the only way it does it for him so Renji's like, fine. If you think that's what you want we'll do it this one last time. Then I'm showing you otherwise. ^^;;

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