Again, loving the Balthazar, and how it's so easy to imagine a scene progressing the way you write it. The idea of the spell and how to go about locating the shards of Gabriel's grace is really interesting, like demonic omens in reverse. Also love that so far, the entire story feels and reads like it could be an episode (or an arc) which is really awesome and pretty rare to get from fanfiction.
I'm so relieved to hear that! I had a lot of trepidation going into writing this because the scope seems so much bigger and more complicated that I'm used to. I try to stray away from more complex plots just because I am terrified I'll screw it up logistically somehow and make it seem unbelievable. ;_;
Ever since Lucifer’s impromptu massacre at the Elysian Fields motel it has been closed, abandoned, and subsequently condemned, its formerly cheerful interior vandalized by passing delinquents, its floors dirtied by squatters and other transients that had taken their chances within its confines before the overall bad vibes of what had transpired inside threatened to overwhelm them, sending them scurrying back into the safety of the open night.
I'm a bad person. After reading the above passage, my first thought was, "It became just like the rest of Muncie!"
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I'm a bad person. After reading the above passage, my first thought was, "It became just like the rest of Muncie!"
(going back to reading amazing fic now, tralala)
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