Argh, boys. Can't get anything out in the open without truth shards or punching each other. But they're talking! Sort of. Poor Sam though, having to just watch those two be all wrapped up in each other.
"roiling waves of man pain" is a glorious description, and as always, everything's remaining in character and really fun to read.
I am LOVING this fic despite (or maybe because of) the strong emotions being wielded like knives. However...I've just gotta say..your descriptions have me NEVER wanting to eat McDonalds..EVER again *snorfle*
Just. awesome chapter. Absolutely loved their confrontational wrath, the increasing sandstorm in the background, sneaking around them as they fought, the abrupt turn of events with the knife heading for Sam, just everything was incredibly well played out and produced awesome imagery in my head.
(And I'm also happy you included the decently awesome tacos part. As a San Diegan, I've found the further you get from the border, the more the tacos start to suck. Utah's tacos were definitely a mistake for me XD)
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"roiling waves of man pain" is a glorious description, and as always, everything's remaining in character and really fun to read.
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(And I'm also happy you included the decently awesome tacos part. As a San Diegan, I've found the further you get from the border, the more the tacos start to suck. Utah's tacos were definitely a mistake for me XD)
Anyways, I'm really loving this story so far. :)
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