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JE/NEWS- "Shot Through the Heart"

Feb 14, 2011 21:57

Title: Shot Through the Heart
Universe: JE/NEWS, Supernatural ( JE+SPN AU)
Theme/Topic: Valentine’s Day, I guess?
Rating: PG for some language
Character/Pairing/s: NEWS+JE (various hinted at pairings within, though they mostly involve KAT-TUN and the sempai…)
Spoilers/Warnings: None I can think of.
Word Count: 5,700
Summary: Tegoshi ( Read more... )

ueda, news au, je+spn au, je, nagase, kame, yamapi, tegoshi, junno, shige, koichi, koki, je au, tokio, kinki kids, jin, sakamoto, koyama, kat-tun, massu, news, nakamaru, v6, ryo, nagano

Comments 19

mousapelli February 15 2011, 22:55:00 UTC

WAAAAAAAH SO CUTE ALDKGJGDKJAGLKJAGAK

mousapelli February 15 2011, 22:58:23 UTC

lol i just wanted first comment for sure. This was seriously hilarious from beginning to end, Tego being random and Koyama and P. P!!!! i love him so much in this universe, wah.

lol the criteria and Jin and that whole ending. and UEDA. as soon as he was involved i was like LOL i know what's going on there yo.

Poor Ryo XD XD XD NEWS is definitely their perfect love match already. How did these morons even find each other?! how?!

Thanks so much for the fic! I love it!!

peroxidepest17 February 15 2011, 23:44:10 UTC

Thank you, you know, for everything. I think I'd spork my own eyes out if I had to beta my own stuff. XD

LOL This originally had a tag where Ueda accidentally picks up the bow afterwards, but I decided that getting hounded for a sequel would no be worth it. XD

HAPPY (KIND OF LATE) V-DAY, MOUSIE. <3

zheinpathos February 16 2011, 00:17:16 UTC

This was adorable! XD

peroxidepest17 February 16 2011, 00:28:37 UTC

Thank you! <3

win03die February 18 2011, 22:06:41 UTC

“Everyone always seems to think Kame needs more love,”
lol, dying so bad right here :D

Nice work, as always.
Haven't read fic much lately, but yours is usually a joy :)

peroxidepest17 February 18 2011, 22:21:12 UTC

Thanks for reading. ^_^

chibisensei0808 February 20 2011, 16:37:53 UTC

Do I have to spell it out how much i enjoyed this fic?

snarky ryo is LOVE and his lines..WIN.

shige's pain is ALWAYS appreciated. i totally kept on replaying the Hadashi encore from the DVD just to see his expressions as tegopi cosplayed, koyamassu mock marched and ryo just being ryo. you can totally see that he's torn between shaking his head and laughing.

NEWS are special lookingat both ends and i don't want it in any other way.

my fave line? i don't know why but --> "i don't have cooties,"

edit? “Nagano-san... troll around the nicer area of the building where the sempai live." isn't it stroll? but troll's kinda funny and would also work for me.

peroxidepest17 February 20 2011, 17:51:11 UTC

Nope, it's definitely troll! tho that might be american slang so people might not get it. ^^

timeripple February 21 2011, 16:14:15 UTC

“Love is mysterious,” P says wisely, and earns surprised but appreciative looks from his groupmates. “This is what the movies have told me,” he amends

Oh P. I love him. I love everybody in this glorious AU. This is adorable and hilarious and I cackled with glee the entire time I was reading. And re-reading. ♥

peroxidepest17 February 21 2011, 19:49:49 UTC

Yay, so glad you liked! ^_^