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One Piece- "Nakama Cycle"

Nov 21, 2005 19:40

Well. Here's pretty much everyone BUT the happy couple? ^^;;

Title: Nakama Cycle
Author: Celeste
Feedback: (yes!) keviesprincess@netscape.net
Theme: 100-150 word drabble cycle in "Courtship Rituals" universe.
Universe: One Piece
Pairing: ZoSan
Rating: PG-13
Time: 1:23 (minor edits)
Word Count: N/A
Summary: Companion Cycle to “Marriage Cycle”- ( Read more... )

vivi, sanji, robin, yosaku, nami, zoroxsanji, usopp, chopper, luffy, johnny, one piece, zoro, zeff, ace

Comments 43

snarkymonkey November 22 2005, 03:58:55 UTC

Heee! I loved it muchly. You wrote their reactions perfectly. A slice-of-life fic has always been a favorite of mine. =3

And that other stuff will probably get Zoro killed.

At least Zoro understands that much. XD~~~ Loved the humor of this! Wonderful work.

peroxidepest17 November 22 2005, 21:29:19 UTC

For all his not-having of survival instincts sometimes, Zoro at least knows that, right? Heh.

And yeah, I think I can only do slice-of-life because my mind doesn't think in long-term arcs. o.o I need to rectify that...probably. ^^;;

ironpuncher2 November 22 2005, 23:06:16 UTC

Oh my god that icon WINS.

peroxidepest17 November 23 2005, 01:28:19 UTC

Hehe my friend beckzerker made it for me. After many months of trying to get her INTO One Piece, our plans have succeeded and she is making us graphics. XD

sinisterbug November 22 2005, 05:04:34 UTC

Aaaw. So awesome. I like the last one. XD

peroxidepest17 November 22 2005, 21:30:43 UTC

Haha the last one was originally 208 words. Cutting was SUCH a bitch. But I'm glad it still managed to make sense even after the...well, rending limb-from-limb that I had to do. ^^;;

vals_revenge18 May 2 2008, 01:10:53 UTC

hmm.... I'd almost consider begging to see the original....

tokki_chan November 22 2005, 05:21:05 UTC

You just made my day. Thank you for that.

peroxidepest17 November 22 2005, 21:31:18 UTC

Happy I could! ^^

winterwaltz6 November 22 2005, 06:08:58 UTC

Fantastic work. I loved them all, especially the last one. Perfect!

peroxidepest17 November 22 2005, 21:32:42 UTC

I think the last one gave me the most trouble overall (Though Johnny and Yosaku's was a CLOSE second)... but it seems that one is the favorite thus far, so I suppose it was worth the trouble after all. ^^ Thanks for your feedback!

mango_32 November 22 2005, 06:10:57 UTC

Aww...these were so cute!
And so like them~ I enjoyed it very much^_^
Thanks alot for posting...I hope you enjoyed writing them too.

peroxidepest17 November 22 2005, 21:34:06 UTC

Some were easier than others, but I did have fun with most of them. Robin's and Choppers came particularly easily, I think, and I liked the effect of those best out of the lot. ^^