JE/NewS+KAT-TUN- "Counting Down"

[peroxide_fic]

Title: Counting Down
Universe: JE ( Government AU)
Theme/Topic: The request was for decent-length, non-romance fic (i.e. epic gen? XD)
Rating: PG-13
Character/Pairing/s: NEWS, KAT-TUN (with guest appearances by Inohara, Tsuyoshi, Tackey, and Koichi)
Warnings/Spoilers: OOC, bad police procedurals.
Word Count: 10,070
Summary: The difference between

Comments

[tsubasa_lupin]

This = WIN!

The parallel between Koyama/NEWS and Nakamaru/KAT-TUN was awesome, and showing the good stuff and the bad stuff of working there...

And Tegoshi stabbing himself for Shige was ALAKDJFHGH LET'S ALL SAVE SHIGE, YO

And Ryo trying to comfort Koyama ♥♥♥

And I just want to kick and hug Kame and Jin at the same time >o<

And Massu being Massu ♥♥♥♥

And of course, Koyama is all about caring about his team ♥

And... I don't know what else to say, because really, this is the best JE AU ever! I just found this universe about a week ago and I'm so in love with it :3

Thank you for creating this! ^^

[peroxidepest17]

Glad you liked!

[ghe21]

oh my god.... you're sooo awesome.... this is sooo good... can't find any words to describe how great this is....

this makes me cry...

tegoshi's doing something like that for shige... aww

and guilty koyama makes me cry

ryo's way in comforting koyama is awesome

So unless you blow up Tokyo Dome in the middle of an idol concert, I will probably have you beat in the body count by the time we both retire

and i like this line

and massu and kusano... uwahhh..

and the way koyama makes that bomb is soo awesome...

and i have to add that jin's advice to nakamaru i sooo cool

[peroxidepest17]

Ryo's comfort is always fun to write. XD

Thanks for commenting!

[annnimeee]

Wow. This was totally worth staying up to read. If apt hunting always gives you such cool stories then maybe we should try to make our lives constantly...mobile.

typo: A bunch of burning steal

i think you mean steel?

[peroxidepest17]

I DID I AM JUST RETARDED AT TWO AM. Haha thanks Ann. XD

[zeffy_amethyst]

...My eyes actually misted up while reading this. That has never happened before......

I love Ryo's way of looking at the world. It's cold, and practical and selfish. And he's not ashamed of it.

[peroxidepest17]

It's how he gets from day to day, I think. That matters a lot in a job like that too.

[ununoriginal]

how can u say this failed when it was SO SO GOOD AND BEAUTIFUL?? it was wonderful the way u compared and contrasted koyama and nakamaru's journey to where they are today. i swear i will NEVER get tired of this 'verse!

[peroxidepest17]

I think it the two parallel stories were tighter in my imagination when I was planning them out; when I actually wrote them they diverged more than I was hoping for, almost to the point of being unrelated. That's what kind of got me feeling off about it when I finished. XD;;