JE/NewS+HSJ- "Making Number Six" (2/2)

[peroxide_fic]

Title: Making Number Six
Universe: JE ( Government AU)
Theme/Topic: NewS as senpai their kouhai look up to.
Rating: PG-13
Character/Pairing/s: HSJ, NEWS, Tackey, Tsubasa
Warnings/Spoilers: OOC, stupidity.
Word Count: 10,756
Summary: Six separate stories come together in the pursuit of one happy ending. Ten rookies each learn something very

Comments

[mkmeikuan]

Hi, this is the first time I am commenting, but when I found myself tearing up at the last couple of lines towards the ending, I thought I should at least err let you know that you actually made me like HSJ for the first time.

And fall in love with NEWS for the 1937442th time.

/ends long-sentence rambling

[peroxidepest17]

I still don't think I like HSJ myself, but it flatters me a lot that I made you like them a little. ^_^ So happy you enjoyed!

[faith_alive]

How everything from the all the different perspectives came together... it's amazing!

I'm so awed... how do you think of these plots?! and brilliant names like Homicide Squad Japan: United Metro Police :DDDD

And as always, the Nippon Emergency Welfare Squad just rawked XDDDD

[peroxidepest17]

LOL oddly enough I construct them as I go. Planning ahead has never been my strong suit. XD;;

[ununoriginal]

I LOVE U SO SO MUCH. u've made news so very very very cool!!!! ryo is still the awesomest, tegoshi is hacker-cool, shige is shige is shige, koyama and massu are heartwarming, and yamapi is... cluelessly amazing!

plus even tho u say u dunno hsj very well, u got some of their characteristics across quite well *coughyamadadivacough* imo :p

i enjoyed every word! ^_^

[peroxidepest17]

YAY glad you liked!

[psych_ten_chan]

This makes me grin so hard. NEWS as dai-sempai. Somehow that makes me giggle. Lol. I liked the Pi-Yabu part. Yamapi was just awesome, believe indeed! Thanks again for the awesome fic! This AU just gets more awesome!

[psych_ten_chan]

Clearly, I think this fic is awesome. I fail at vocabulary when I'm post-work. Lol.

[peroxidepest17]

LOL Awesome! <3

[peroxidepest17]

one day they totally will be dai-senpai. Probably more like V6 are than the other senpai. <3

[seca]

♥ I love you for this. I know you said it was long but I had no idea that it would up being this long, not that I'm complaining of course. ^__^

I think you did fine with writing a group as large as HSJ without really knowing much of anything about any of them. I do like it and it was well worth the wait. ♥

[peroxidepest17]

GOD STILL. it was a really really long wait. I worry about my speed as time goes on. -_-;;

[seca]

Well I've come to believe that any fic cannot be short when you actually have every member of HSJ actually do something. And I wouldn't worry about your current speed, as you seem to be writing longer fics than before.

And on another note, did you know someone has translated one of your old Bleach fics into Portuguese?

[peroxidepest17]

Oh yeah! She asked, so all is good. LOL I don't know how good her translations ARE but that's why the link to the original is there. XD