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Bleach Drabble (245-248)

Nov 13, 2005 14:57

ARGH this storyboard assignment is kicking my ass. I would probably have a lot more written this weekend otherwise. -_-;;

245.

Title: One Hundred Years of Solitude
Rating: PG-13
Pairing/Character/s: YoruichixSoi Fong (ish)
Word Count: 574
Warning/s: Spoilers for the Soul Society arc.
Summary: Yoruichi doesn’t know what to say.
Dedication: ( Read more... )

shuuhei, matsumoto, soi fong, yoruichixsoi fong, yoruichi, kyourakuxukitake, kira, ukitake, bleach, hitsugaya, hinamori, kyouraku

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tsurugi November 14 2005, 03:15:52 UTC

XD NOTHING LIKE A FAT DOSE OF COLD HARD REALITY COURTESY OF YOUR FRIENDLY NEIGHBORHOOD SOI FONG. She's so... so angry and blunt and jaded and just strong. ;_; Haha. (I just remembered how much I freaking LOVE her.) She kicks over the cocoa. Concise, yet eloquent and artistic. ♥♥

Awwwwwwwwwww! *_* Hitsugaya getting his first kiss from MATSUMOTO~ it was bound to happen, HAHA.

peroxidepest17 November 14 2005, 07:47:22 UTC

Can you just IMAGINE Kira's face when she kicks his cup out of his hands? The PUPPY-ness. Hehe well, I amused myself with that image as I was writing it anyway. XD

You know Toushirou is so cool he could totally land much older babes. XD

idiosyn November 14 2005, 03:50:19 UTC

Because I have a very bad track record on commenting on your drabbles and fics I feel the urge to do so now. And not just for the fact that I read your latest installment on the Newlywed Arc (which I loved and none of you 'I-hate-how-it-turned-out'ness can stop me!).

246/7 in particular I thought we very, very good. Because sometimes you forget that Soi Fong was left behind and that they will eventually cross paths again. Very poignant and heartfelt and lovely and painful and I may need a dictionary here in a moment.

And then Hitsugaya and Rangiku. How can you ever go wrong with those two in a drabble, really? While I'm not completely sold on them as a couple, just all the fun with him not yet hitting puberty and her being so damn gorgeous is just ASKING for it, really XD

peroxidepest17 November 14 2005, 07:49:45 UTC

I'm glad you liked that! I was really debating abou the whole comedic timing of it considering I've been out of One Piece for so long and dude, my timing is set to focus on Bleach and while they're similar sort-of, they're also frustratingly different when I'm trying to write them. This is the pain of being out of practice, I suppose. ^^;;

Toushirou and Rangiku are just a FUN captain/vice pair, aren't they? Sometimes I think I should feel horrible for being so amused by it, but it totally is my cup of tea and while I suppose it would save me a lot of grief if I liked HitsugayaxHinamori, there is just something about his face getting smashed into her chest that makes me love HxM so much more. ^^;;

idiosyn November 14 2005, 15:46:45 UTC

I thought it was very good (honestly I will admit it's not one of the betters in the series, but it's still good) and you did a very, very good job in the build up of tensions and frustrations. Nothing less than you'd expect after six months (six months?? Zoro's a friggin' saint, right hand or not!) of not getting anywhere.

No matter how much love I have for 11th division dumbassery, Hitsugaya and Rangiku are my favorite captain/vice pair. It probably would save both of us the grief to like Hitsugaya/Hinamori but they don't quite have that same dynamic. And it's not just the face+boob equation that makes them so timeless XD

fairywine November 14 2005, 05:15:54 UTC

GO Soi Fong!Go Matsumoto!Go Yoruichi! I <3 you all!

peroxidepest17 November 14 2005, 07:50:24 UTC

Girl power, eh? ^^y

fairywine November 14 2005, 07:55:10 UTC

What can I say? They're all ass-kicking women who rock.Who doesn't like that?

conri November 14 2005, 06:31:24 UTC

I always like Yoruichi/Soi Fong, and #245 was well written. Nice job of conveying the awkwardness and frustration ( ... )

peroxidepest17 November 14 2005, 07:51:03 UTC

Ahahaha, my typos are legendary, I mean it. But all fixed now, so thanks for your input!

squeeeeedrabbles! jen_chan13 November 15 2005, 01:15:46 UTC

loveloveloveLOVE!!!! i am just now remembering why i love soi fong and yoruichi so much. they have so~o much potential... ^_^ the emotion between them is startling, and you portrayed it beautifully! and hitsugaya/matsumoto was also incredibly adorable... hitsugaya has always had a place close to my heart, so the overwheming cuteness of 247 is absolutely wonderful. yay for drabbles! have you ever considered doing nanowrimo? i imagine you could make the word count without trying, the way you're pumping these out... count all the words you've written for november, and if it's anywhere in the ballpark of 2,333 words (today's avg requirement), i totally recommend you going for it. insane fun to be had for all!
~jen-chan

Re: squeeeeedrabbles! peroxide_fic November 15 2005, 22:53:35 UTC

I think about naniwrimo sometimes, but then I think I definitely can't write a whole story that's THAT long. I had a hard enough time pumping out one single RenjixByakuya one for a novel challenge and that was only 11,000 words. o.o But I'm sure collectively I'll have a good number by the end of the month? ^^;;