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Bleach- "Five Times Ikkaku Tried to Ask Kira Out (and One Time He Succeeded)"

May 26, 2007 14:56

Title: Five Times Ikkaku Tried to Ask Kira Out (and One Time He Succeeded)
Universe: Bleach
Theme/Topic: LOL as the title says.
Rating: PG-13
Character/Pairing/s: IkkakuxKira, Yumichika, Iba, Shuuhei, Renji, Matsumoto (mentions some IbaxMatsumoto and past GinxKira)
Warnings/Spoilers: Vague spoilers for the SS arc. Pretty much AU after that. Also! ( Read more... )

matsumoto, ibaxmatsumoto, ginxkira, yumichika, ikkakuxkira, kira, bleach, renji, ikkaku, iba

Comments 40

cheloya May 27 2007, 00:30:14 UTC

Your thuggery always makes me giggle helplessly, seriously. It is so clear that you have brothers. ♥ And the fact that wingmen like Yumichika completely make up for wingmen like Renji, Shuuhei and Iba? Priceless. I love those two so much. XD

black_widow1417 May 27 2007, 02:53:05 UTC

icon=WIN lolz

peroxidepest17 May 27 2007, 23:54:31 UTC

Haha It's clear that I have STUPID brothers. LOL XD

zeffy_amethyst May 27 2007, 00:40:34 UTC

I'd say don't be so hard on yourself but I know that it's easy to be critical of every piece you write. Writers are crazy like that.

I loved this fic. Ikakku is just so...stupid and Yumichika is right to be wary of him. And The Thugs are pure awesome. I love the way you write them. And of course, Kira is too cute for words.

peroxidepest17 May 27 2007, 23:55:13 UTC

I'm glad you liked it! Haha I think I will always be critical of everything, I can't help it. XD

1st_eggokage May 27 2007, 02:35:24 UTC

...OMG SO CUTE. Once again, I am reminded which author gave me my obsession with Thug Love. *hugs*

Also, Matsumoto's stripper ratings made me laugh so hard that my brother was convinced I was having a seizure.

peroxidepest17 May 27 2007, 23:55:55 UTC

I would feel inadequate if I was a stripper and Matsumoto was around. LOL

black_widow1417 May 27 2007, 03:05:42 UTC

what would ikkaku do without yumi to guide him XD Yumi=the bestest friend EVAR.

sweet enough for a toothache. loved it. 8)

peroxidepest17 May 27 2007, 23:56:45 UTC

I want Yumi to be my gay best friend. XD

erinlin May 27 2007, 04:06:49 UTC

Awww. That was cute. I loved it when Rangiku asked him out, that whole scene was *so* funny. ^_^

peroxidepest17 May 29 2007, 03:57:22 UTC

I'm glad it was funny! I don't consider myself a particular expert on writing Ran, so I am always kind of "errrr..." when I use her. >>