Bleach- "One Week"

May 02, 2007 00:11

Hur hur, not random at all. no Rlly. *shot*

Title: One Week
Universe: Bleach
Theme/Topic: N/A
Rating: PG-13
Character/Pairing/s: Ikkaku, Kira, Yachiru, Kenpachi
Warnings/Spoilers: Um, vague spoilers for the arrankar arc, but everyone probably knows more about it than me at this point. Also, OOC and weirdness.
Word Count: 3,179
Summary: Kira ( Read more... )

kira, kenpachi, bleach, ikkaku, yachiru

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You write at work, I read at work. Deal? orenodake May 2 2007, 07:54:52 UTC
And so, at the very end of Madarame Ikkaku’s seventh day as captain of the third division, Kira Izuru thought to himself that maybe he understood exactly what kind of person his new captain was after all.

As it turned out, he was just a lot simpler than Kira had first expected.

*head desk* Kiiiiiraaaaaa *wails*

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Re: You write at work, I read at work. Deal? peroxidepest17 May 2 2007, 17:24:43 UTC
LOL NEITHER OF US SHOULD READ OR WRITE AT WORK THO.

Though I guess it's never really stopped me before. XD

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Re: You write at work, I read at work. Deal? orenodake May 3 2007, 07:04:35 UTC
Stop? Can you?
Especially when the devil of a muse kicking you hard and repeatedly...+ when the situation is possible and oh so supporting (aka..boredom)

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cheloya May 2 2007, 09:19:29 UTC
Edits:
"Too the bar!" -o.
"Yeah, the fuckiin' bar," -i
(Your Ikkaku just gets a little excited about the bar, it seems. XD ♥)

My god, I love the way you put the sheer differences between Ikkaku and Gin's methods of command, because that really would affect everything. XD It must really be something, going from having to calculate every action's motive to Ikkaku's honest way of dealing with things.

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cheloya May 2 2007, 09:20:03 UTC
And apparently I get a little excited about the [i] tag. Whoops.

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peroxidepest17 May 2 2007, 17:24:01 UTC
I blame the Mac keyboards at work. They're so smooth and not at all like my shitty keyboard here. THEY'RE STILL SENSITIVE.

Damn you, Mac.

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sophiap May 2 2007, 10:14:53 UTC
Loved it! (Sorry I haven't been commenting in a while - work is eating me alive, and I've been skimming through the flist meaning to go back and read things later).

I can easily imaging Kira second-guessing everything for a long time, trying to figure out what subtle traps were there behind supposed kindness. One of the things I liked was that not just Kira, but the other seated officers were in that state of twitchiness that comes from never knowing if you're going to get a knife in the back or a pat on the head.

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peroxidepest17 May 2 2007, 17:26:58 UTC
It's just that time of year where everyone gets swamped, I think. LOL You can tell I've got lots of work too, by the fact that I AM NOT DOING IT AND WRITING FIC INSTEAD. *sigh* I need better resolve. And bribes. XD

Anyway, fight on, Soph! Kick work's ass. XD

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carameltrap May 2 2007, 10:38:37 UTC
Awesome.

Aww, poor Kira. He was just so paranoid. Glad he figured out that Ikakku wasn't testing him or anything. I don't think shunpo can go any faster. lol.

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peroxidepest17 May 2 2007, 17:58:28 UTC
LOL I'm sure there are levels of Shunpo! Like how Yoruichi always beats Byakuya. XD

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nennen79 May 2 2007, 13:39:50 UTC
Nice. Kira is probably going to remain twitchy for awhile (as will Whatsyourname and Whatsyourface). As for Ikkaku being simpler than he thought being a good thing (or a bad thing!)...I look forward to more of your stories to see what conclusions he comes to.

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peroxidepest17 May 2 2007, 17:30:26 UTC
LOL I think he'll be twitchy for a while and then eventually get fed up with Ikkaku's dicking around and pull a Nanao on him or something. Lots of *thwap* "Taichou wake up." *thwap*

XD

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nennen79 May 2 2007, 18:31:54 UTC
I love the idea of Kira acting like Nanao! Can you imagine him trying to prevent Ikkaku from heading to the bar?! Ah, the comedic possibilities...

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