Bleach- "For the Children"

[peroxide_fic]

IT IS MIDNIGHT SO HAPPY BIRTHDAY sophiap!!!!

Title: For the Children
Universe: Bleach
Theme/Topic: Yachiru’s strength
Rating: PG-13
Character/Pairing/s: Kenpachi, Yachiru, Byakuya
Warnings/Spoilers: Slight spoilers for Byakuya’s backstory, Kenpachi and Yachiru’s backstory, and the SS arc.
Word Count: 4,076
Summary: Byakuya’s rude awakening.
Dedication

Comments

[peroxidepest17]

LOL I think anyone would give into whatever Yachiru wanted if only she asked and asked and asked and asked. XD

[alaceron]

I love your 11th Division so much. ^-^

[peroxidepest17]

Yay!!

it's ggggrreat!

[squaresphere]

Great fic very entertaining. Only one point

"Byakuya was about to protest that logic (clearly failed)" Shouldn't it be (clearly flawed) since he thinking about Ken's logic?

Re: it's ggggrreat!

[peroxidepest17]

I'm not sure, but I think failed logic works too? I heard it on CNN once I think. LOL Tho don't take my word for it. >>

Re: it's ggggrreat!

[yshani]

Please never assume anything you see on CNN or FOX news represents proper english. =) It should be flawed not failed in the way you used it.

Re: it's ggggrreat!

[peroxidepest17]

LOL oookay. I guess I'll take your word for it. *clueless*

[netherrain]

lovely, lovely :).

[peroxidepest17]

^_^

[ziyad]

it's a good story. i like the way you write zaraki and yachiru and how they interact with each other. but now i've got this picture of them and byakuya playing family with byakuya as the mother who tries to teach his daughter some manners which get spoiled by the father zaraki. won't they be cute together?

[peroxidepest17]

They would be one bizarre adorable family. XD

[ziyad]

yes, but wouldn't it be fun to hear yachiru call byakuya mama? ^.~

[peroxidepest17]

LOL Oh god but I thought that's what Yumi was? XD