Bleach Drabble (209-211)

[peroxide_fic]

Thursdays are the only days when I have time in the afternoon between classes, so I speed wrote three of these suckers to put out before I pass out for the weekend. Yay? Or not...

209.

Title: A Simple Game of Tag
Rating: G
Pairing/Character/s: Byakuya, Yoruichi
Word Count: 983
Warning/s: Spoilers for Ep 42 of the anime

Comments

[mushrooms]

Aizen sighs fondly and remembers a time when Izuru’s face was just as soft as Kira’s is now,

But other than that...

I LOVE the example Byakuya used. Just... sheer... LOVE. ♥

Byakuya-bo is adorable in a very stoic way, too.

[peroxide_fic]

Ahahahha I are retarded like woah.

Too many names! Too many names!!! ^^;;

[mirime]

And every guest turned their noses up to him and gave him a pat on the head, telling him to keep up the good work, before dismissing him like the object of momentary interest he was.

fabulous! this is exactly how i've envisioned young!Byakuya since the start!!! ♥ that fic was so lovely and so true to the way i see the two of them!

[peroxide_fic]

Me thinking of kiddie!Byakukya is just a world of OMG so cute and dude, he must have had it tough when you think about it, right? If it was all flowers he probably wouldn't be such a interpersonal retard. XD

[dawninhell]

You are making me go Byakuya x Yoruichi OTP. XO

[peroxide_fic]

It was EPISODE 42! Hostile flirting!!! TAG! TAG!

[wax_feathers]

//a simple game of tag
Somuchheart. Like...♥. *__* Lovely representation of the snootiness of nobility, the rivalries and sizing-ups... Wonderfully done. ^^

//stay away from my sister
Amusing, yes. x3 I feel bad saying so, but it was a bit weak in speech where, in image, it was definitely funny. Ichigo banging his head on the table and saying that line was a great way to end it. x3 Only the build-up was a teeeeeeny bit weak. n.n;

//this sweet taste
I...still haven't quite read up to present yet (still stuck back at 181), so any real significance in relation to the more recent chapters are past me. n.n; Nevertheless, I like the idea to Aizen's perceptions; the breaking and taming, the tasting of his subjects. There's the faint undertone of passion and sex, and it colours the characters nicely. I also have an uber!♥ for Gin and his corruptions, so it made me squee with happy. ^__^

[peroxide_fic]

Ahhhhhhh build up. I suppose I wasn't going for build up so much as just quick back and forth momentum there, but I suppose it probably needs some to get that final line to stick...

Right. Practice, practice, practice. ^^;;

[peroxide_fic]

Glad you liked it!