Bleach- "In the Line of Duty- 20 Ways Eleventh Division Members Lived and Died"

[peroxide_fic]

HAHAHA I AM DUMB.

Title: In the Line of Duty- 20 Ways Eleventh Division Members Lived and Died
Universe: Bleach
Rating: R for blood and violence.
Pairing/Character/s: Eleventh Division (OMCS to the max), Yamamoto
Word Count: 6,916
Warning/s: Spoilers for the SS arc and speculations on the past and the future. Also, death. So yeah.
Summary:

Comments

[sophiap]

That turned out fabulously. I really, really like the way the secondary characters in one wind up the focus of the next piece. And I LOVED the way the last four worked together to drive home the point of what it is that people die for. Brilliant.

The only typo I noticed was in the last one: "others drifted in to join them as ewll" The last word needs fixing.

[peroxidepest17]

Yipes! Thanks for the catch, Soph! And I'm happy it worked. ^^;;

[namaikhan]

*star eyes* That was BEAUTIFUL! Absolutely beautiful. ^__^ Thank you very much for writing something like this. None of the stupid panisies in the other divisions (never counting the ones promoted out of 11th, since once 11th always 11th) could live die so freaking well. I greedily want more. =D

[peroxidepest17]

The eleventh is the pinnacle of divisionhood to emulate. XD

[cheloya]

I just want you to know that I love you and taht your thug mentality beats any other thug mentality ever imagined and that I may have to print this out and stick it to my wall.

It also made me cry like crazy whoa. It's goddamn amazing that you do this with people I don't know. ♥

[peroxidepest17]

I love you too, my dear! ♥

[peroxidepest17]

Thank you!

spelling

[anonymous]

"she complained vocally, and hit it even after the creature was long diseased."

I think you mean deceased, or however the synonym for dead is spelled. I can't think straight right now because of your fic. Gah, so depressing, but so damn right

Re: spelling

[peroxidepest17]

Whoops, thanks for that! LOL