fic: Captivity (2/?)

[periariyx]

Title: Captivity (2/?)
Word Count: ~8600
Fandom: Star Trek
Characters/Pairings: ensemble; eventual Kirk/Spock
Summary: Prompted by st_xi_kink, here: AU. Twenty-seven years ago, Earth initiated war with Vulcan. Twenty-five years ago, the Vulcans won. Twenty-four years ago, humans became their slaves. Three years ago, Jim Kirk met Leonard McCoy. Today, they -

Comments

[acountrymouse]

Again, love this. I like seeing everyone's perspective. The difference between Sulu and Chekov was really profound.

And Bones! Oh Bones, I'm so sad for him. And he's the pragmatic, "Kill the bastards before they kill you" guy that no Rebel Band can be without. I like, even though it's sad. I can just imagine what he's going to be like when Spock shows up. Which I can't wait for! When, uh, is he gonna show up? *Fails at subtle*

[periariyx]

Thank you! (When I say ensemble, I really do mean it - I can't stand to leave any of the main guys out, I love them all too much.)

Hee! I'm barely scratching the surface with Bones here, really - he's gonna be so much fun to delve into more, but the fact that it already looks like it with him has me all the more excited to really do it.

Hahaha - I'm looking at my outline (fun fact - the plot takes up twelve pages and with these two chapters I'm maybe, uh, three quarters of the way through the first. Whoops), but it looks like he should be coming up in the next one! Yaaay!

And thank you once again for this gorgeous comment! :D I'm delighted that you're enjoying it!

[renuki]

Kirk is planning on kidnapping Spock? Ohh....*wonders if he does*

...And this Bones's interactions with Spock is going to be...interesting to say the lest. personally...I kinda of curious on their reaction if/when they find out that Spock? Is half-human as well. XD

And there goes the shields..or at least a shield.

[periariyx]

I'd assume that absolutely would be of interest, yes. Hee. As long as things remain interesting!

Thank you!

[renuki]

*grin* Indeed.

Ya welcome!

[periariyx]

Ohh, me and build-up. Glad to know it's not being too much, haha!

Thank you so much! He'll be here soon. :D

[lemmiki]

I always find the best things just a little bit late. Anyway, I love this universe. I love it a lot. The way you've fitted the characters into it is flawless and it all makes sense. Now I'm going to go back and re-read the first chapter. <333 This is just pure awesome.

[periariyx]

Aaw, you are so sweet!

It's not necessarily too late, I should point out, though; real-life kind of skull-fucked me harder than I was expecting and then other fandoms of mine started coming to the forefront and things got messy and writing kind of fell by the wayside as a result. I'm all kinds of shamed for this, seriously.

But aah, thank you so much! I'm delighted that this world just... works that way for you. :D I'm working on some other stuff right now, trying to get back into writing, but I'll probably end up taking another crack at this as well~

Again can't thank you ENOUGH for this comment, you're just far too sweet and it's making me feel very happy and warm and fuzzy inside. <33 Thank youu!

[periariyx]

I have absolutely no problem with you friending me! :D I'm honoured, and thank you. I'm hoping to be able to get back to it... ... sometime in the nearish future. H-hopefully. ... It's not dead yet!

Thanks again, and absolutely, go ahead~