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FIC: Impossible (29/30)

Nov 06, 2011 00:39

Title: Impossible
Author: perfect_pride
Pairing: Hermione/Bellatrix
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: It goes without saying that none of the Harry Potter world or its’ characters belong to me, unfortunately. Neither do the lyrics.
Warnings: Mental and physical abuse/torture.
Summary: Bellatrix abducts Hermione and keeps her prisoner, but an ancient magic threatens to change ( Read more... )

harry potter, fic, fic: impossible, pairing: hermione/bellatrix

Comments 9

priestessofxtc November 6 2011, 04:12:35 UTC

No, it can't almost be over! D:

perfect_pride November 11 2011, 21:48:45 UTC

It is... sorry! :P

leenat November 6 2011, 11:02:46 UTC

That was awesome. In this chapter, I get to see the inner dialogue and the interpersonal. It's wonderful how you show feelings without awkward show. Bellatrix has changed and really cares about Hermione.
At first I thought that Bellatrix and Hermione could live apart from their different lifestyles, but in the end I was witness to the contrary. The internal debates about life, friends, changes, feelings and differences have intrigued me and how you write it. They fit into this sequence. Even if the end is in sight, I am impressed by your story and character development that you have done great job of.

perfect_pride November 11 2011, 21:49:25 UTC

Thank you very much, I'm pleased you think so! :)

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perfect_pride November 11 2011, 21:50:24 UTC

Haha, I'm not sure about that, but thank you! :P

Glad you like the DWP stories too... I used to be really obsessed with that but am much more into HP these days.

Cheers for the review. :P

kali_blue November 9 2011, 07:32:04 UTC

I've been deluding myself that if I don't post a comment it won't end, but alas that it just untrue and so unbalanced. I'm in denial clearly, perhaps more so than Bellatrix.

This story has been so awesome and complex. I love the tender moments and the full on Bellatrix at her most challenging and damaged with Hermione trying to pull out some shred of humanity. Your characters have surprising (unpredictable) depths and make me crave more. Kali

perfect_pride November 11 2011, 21:52:40 UTC

Haha, good luck with that denial! I'm pleased you've enjoyed the story so much. :) Hopefully you will enjoy the final part! Thanks for the review, as always. :D

demoka November 12 2011, 12:47:06 UTC

Gah, had read this chapter earlier, but had to go to work and only just now have I returned, remembering that I had yet to post a comment! Am behind on SOOOOO much fic!

But anyways....

Eee! It's kinda adorable how Narcissa is just like: "What? When did I say I hate you?"
And Hermione is just: *silence* *thinks*
Narcissa: See!

Gah, so much happened in this chapter! Bella finding out about the really ill-thought out kiss and just the whole ordeal with Bella demanding an Unbreakable! Yes, she really DOESN'T think things through sometimes! Keep at it Hermione!

perfect_pride November 17 2011, 22:57:27 UTC

Haha, thank you. I've sort of left it a little ambigious as far as Narcissa's thoughts about Hermione are concerned, but I wanted to make it clear that she doesn't hate her by any means.

What can I say? Bella is still a little crazy (ok very crazy :P) and always will be!

Cheers for the review as always. <3