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FIC: Impossible (16/30)

Sep 01, 2011 20:06

Title: Impossible
Author: perfect_pride
Pairing: Hermione/Bellatrix
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: It goes without saying that none of the Harry Potter world or its’ characters belong to me, unfortunately. Neither do the lyrics.
Warnings: Mental and physical abuse/torture.
Summary: Bellatrix abducts Hermione and keeps her prisoner, but an ancient magic threatens to change ( Read more... )

harry potter, fic, fic: impossible, pairing: hermione/bellatrix

Comments 4

kali_blue September 1 2011, 23:38:01 UTC

Great update! Bella has changed to a softer side and Hermione is fierce. Hermione has such high expectations for Bellatrix to change her whole world view and behavior when frankly, Bella'd never had reason to question her actions before now. I think she's shown remarkable progress.

Favorite parts: I loved how Hermione cursed her & took her wand. Bella hugging her sister and trying to get protection for Cissy & Draco. I don't see Bellatrix as quite insane anymore, but I guess its a process.

Kali

perfect_pride September 4 2011, 21:18:32 UTC

Thank you! I think she has too. I don't want to rush it because half the time I think that's what makes Bellatrix gone good fics unbelievable; she just suddenly changes her mind.

I don't think she's as insane either, and I suppose the reason for that is that she's finally feeling a love that is reciprocated. Not that being lonely made her insane, but I think it definitely contributed towards it!.

demoka September 2 2011, 11:59:16 UTC

Poor Bella, must be damn confusing to be her.

Ah, loved this chapter~! Good to see Bellatrix seeing consequences of her actions. haha, yeah, thought so, only Hermione, not anyone else even if they are important to Hermione. Haha, and she still has time to be jealous!

And yes, even though it's horrid that she tortured her and all that again, even after everything, really how did Hermione think Bellatrix could keep up the act with the others around? Ah well.

haha, glad you went with date/month/year, I hate it when people put the month first, that just doesn't make sense, yo!

*huggles the tired Bella* *huggles Hermione just for being her* Poor things.

perfect_pride September 4 2011, 21:20:21 UTC

Yep, she is confused for sure.

I agree. She had to do that, and I didn't see any other way if I wanted to stick to canon events.

Me too, I get confused with month/date/year, it makes no sense to me either.

Thank you. <3