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lefferson December 17 2016, 14:01:05 UTC
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW~ Sweet.

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ashley_pitt December 18 2016, 14:05:27 UTC
Thanks!

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rifleman_s December 17 2016, 16:52:04 UTC
"The night was crystal clear and sky was ablaze with hundreds of stars. Jacks breath puffed out on billowing clouds as he made his way aft to the taffrail."

What a marvellous description; I could almost be there . . .

Yes, middle-of-the-night fears; we're all subject to them, I guess - but how wonderful of Jack to be able to allay Stephen's, and then have "Happy Christmas" said in return.

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ashley_pitt December 18 2016, 14:07:01 UTC
Thank you.

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esteven December 18 2016, 10:45:08 UTC
What a lovely, lovely story around something most of us have experienced, because all bad things are exagerated in the middle of the night. But for Jack and Stephen you have found the perfect antidote.

A Merry Christmas to you. :)

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ashley_pitt December 18 2016, 14:07:43 UTC
So glad that you liked it! and merry Christmas to you!

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esteven December 22 2016, 18:29:56 UTC
What is not to like? You wrote it! :)

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ashley_pitt December 23 2016, 01:58:53 UTC
*grins* happily

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dorinda December 19 2016, 01:40:32 UTC
So I came on deck to clear my mind by trying to discern where the stars in the sky meet those in the sea.”

I really love that image...what an evocative line! Thanks for posting this.

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ashley_pitt December 19 2016, 01:48:36 UTC
Thank you for reading and commenting. At night on a ship away from land the sky really does merge right into the water

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