Articles of Love - Elaborated, fic

Jul 22, 2013 00:08

Author: amaraal
Pairing: Jack/Stephen
Rating: PG up to NC-17
Word count: 100 / 676
Summary: Articles of War must have a counterpart.
A/N: Cleaning my hard drive. My first Jack/Stephen drabble. In fact it’s my first drabble. In fact, articles contain a subject and a restriction. So… this can possibly be elaborated. Let me know, what you think.
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fanfiction, author/artist: a, rating: nc-17

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rifleman_s July 22 2013, 09:52:03 UTC
"A long shivering sigh, Jack’s teeth at his throat, his own fingers in the golden strands Stephen opens himself completely, gives himself over to the wild but tender force that is Jack Aubrey, a gentle giant..."

Articles fulfilled indeed!

This was not the sort of story to read in this hot weather - my temperature was high enough, now it's boiling - but beautifully!

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amaraal July 22 2013, 10:19:20 UTC
A comment!!! Hugs you!!!
Isn't it aggravating - you write something you think absolute incredible - and no one comments?
I scampered through my thumb drive yesterday - and found this :)

Here too. 26°C/79°F... *melts* Let's melt together.

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rifleman_s July 22 2013, 18:23:27 UTC
Awwww, thanks!

I'd never read anything without a comment, even if it's just a "smiley" face! But this deserved so much more!

Mmmm, it's easy to melt in the presence of these men . . .

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nodbear July 28 2013, 19:09:40 UTC
Amaraal at her hot best

grand my dear

just the thing to cheer me up after feeling a little low post conference :)

what a neat little use of phrase and much else
*hugs and bows*

ps postcard on way from Anteros and self from Portsmouth

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nodbear July 28 2013, 19:11:00 UTC
ps think everyone is too hot and sleepy for proper commenting - but I am getting someway back to it at last

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amaraal July 28 2013, 20:10:27 UTC
*hugs and bows back* It was a bit quiet lately, so I thought 'Post it'... Yes, everyone seems to be at sea :)

There was a postcard from Harris. Thanks for that! One can never receive enough cards! The Blutack really comes in handy here.

How is your laptop, btw?

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pollyandr3 July 31 2013, 06:52:17 UTC
Question: A picture of the action, or the aftermath? I am just curious.. and not committing myself.... yet
By the way, didn't this get posted before? I thought I read it before somewhere. I like to go into the archives and read old stuff on Perfect_Duet, because I love it so. I loved this too, first read and THIS one too! Thanks!

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amaraal July 31 2013, 10:08:40 UTC
Spontaneously I would say 'Both!' :) The Aftermath, if you please. With the spectacles on the floor catching, reflecting the sun :)

Yes, it had been posted before as a 100 word drabble. As I said - I am lazy and deserve... anyway!

Thanks for your comment!

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pollyandr3 July 31 2013, 19:15:45 UTC
I will have to re-read and think about it. After all, I got this new drawing set just wasting away.. I should really draw something.. but I am not promising anything. I am a very busy girl and never let myself have any fun! :)

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pollyandr3 July 31 2013, 19:17:23 UTC
You deserve the lash? Well, that depends, who would you want exacting the punishment? Jack or Stephen? Both? Well.. anyway I will have to really think about drawing them..hmmm

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esteven September 15 2013, 14:26:56 UTC
“Ten, keep him by your side.” Jack whispers.
“Always.” Stephen whispers back.

And is that now how it should be? I am so glad you pointed this out. It cannot be said often enough that Jack and Stephen belong together and that they deserve every bit of happiness they can get.

I am so glad I came across it when it was no longer so very warm. It is a beautiful piece of fluff, but it is very hot fluff.

Thank you.
*smiles brightly*

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amaraal September 15 2013, 16:02:30 UTC
*beams* Thank you. Of course they belong together. Can it be otherwise? :)

Agreed - it's hot fluff for a grey Sunday. Thanks again for commenting :)

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esteven September 15 2013, 16:39:03 UTC
Since it is getting colder, at least in my neck of the woods, it is just the right thing to read. *g*

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