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[perdita_x]

This is the french piece that I need checking over. It's been run through babelfish and I have no idea if it's correct or not.

Thanks in advance.

Comments

[thecrazyfinn]

Looks relatively good. It's a little awkward sounding to me, but that may be just the fact that I'm more used to Quebecois and Franccais Canadien, which is different from Parisienne (In the case of Quebecois, it's just about a different language).

[katelemon]

Exactly what I was going to say

[mrmist]

What I can make out looks like it should be the right words, but may be grammatically odd if a pure-French speaker were to read it. Unfortunately I have not studied French for a long while.

[oldbloke]

"station de train" ?
ought to be "gare", shurely?
So I stopped there.

[oldbloke]

Try posting the English version here and let people take a shot at translating, AND tell their friends to tell their friends to take a look